Sup? I'm back. I hope you like this one. Based on the song "My Immortal" by Evanescence.
My Immortal
The night never looked so beautiful before. The stars scattered like shards of a broken mirror,the moon glowing bright silver.
Heavenly, was the right word.
Then there was the sea,
lashing and crashing happily against the shore.
I'm so tired of being here,
Suppressed by all my childish fears
Yet,all those seemed so distant when I get lost in his mesmerizing sea-green eyes. His messy black hair sweeped to the side, his gentle yet firm hand holding on to my delicate little one, I could have sat there all night, staring at the goofy smile plastered on his face.
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
Then we started walking back to the barren road and the dim-lit shops.
I suddenly stopped to stare at the haunted road.
A feeling crept over me that a thousand spiders might appear out of the blue.
These wounds won't seem to heal
Then he wrapped his hands around me, sensing my discomfort, it instantly made me feel relieved. Then I laughed so hard that my stomach hurt.
Why did I feel fear when he was near me?
This pain is just too real
Then I started dancing. He looked at me with an amused expression.
I felt myself flow with the silent rhythm. This was the best day of my life. nothing could separate me from this bliss. This is what I felt...until I saw the light.
There's just too much that time cannot erase
I stood shell-shocked there, not even being able to lift a finger as I saw the speeding lights moving closer towards me.
Next thing I know, I was pushed towards the cold floor.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
My brain cell could not process everything at once. Then slowly the gears shifted and the pain came crushing down as I realised what had happened.
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I turned around and saw his motionless body lying in a pool of crimson liquid. I crawled up to him, ignoring the searing pain in my broken leg. I clutched his hand as tightly as I could.
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
No, he can't leave me
"No, don't leave me. Please, I beg you...please, I-I love you. Don't leave." I pleaded
You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
The heaven seems to cry too, for as the rain came down as silently as the one that dripped down my cheek.
No, he can't be fading, he is stronger than this.
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
How can a truck kill this thick-headed seaweed brain? It was simply not possible. Why did he save me?
...How can I belive he is gone?
These wounds won't seem to heal
I looked at him, weeping and praying my heart out while he tried to give his best lop-sided goofy grin.
I could see the life force dying away from him
...slowly,...painfully.
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase
"I love you too, w-wise girl" he managed to utter. I couldn't stop sobbing.
Why was my chest feeling so heavy?
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I saw him desperately holding my hand.
He gave me one last smile and the light faded from his oceanic emerald orbs as he descended towards eternal darkness...
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I was left staring at his eyes, his lovely sea green eyes I would never get lost in again.
His firm grip I would never be held in again
His words never spoken again...
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along
I woke up sobbing. Why won't he leave me alone?
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
Why does he make me lose my sanity?
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
...Why did he have to go?
And I held your hand through all of these years
I clutch my heart in a desperate attempt to ease the heavy burden in my chest as I started weeping once again.
But you still have all of me...
I was still alive, but he had taken all of me with him...
All of me...
aaaaand...CUT! that's it folks!
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