Introduction
This was very hard for me to write and I want to clear up any confusion you might have with the rest of the story. The narrator is a liar. Megan, is not the narrator. They are two different characters.
The Akatsuki members are mostly acting in character. It's up to you to figure out the lies!
Example:
"Whatever," Itachi said smiling at his wonderful girlfriend. Did you catch the oocness?
Another:
"Sure," Konan said swinging her massive boobs in Hidan's face. Now would Konan really do that? Basically you can only trust what the Akatsuki say.
Example:
Pein jumped up and down happily. "No I didn't," Pein lied.
Pein said he didn't so he didn't. No matter how much the narrator says he did the Akatsuki tell what actually happen.
When you see:
"I think we lost her."
"Yeah we did!"
The narrator doesn't know what's going on but you, the reader, does! A downside is that you don't know who's saying what but it doesn't really matter. A benefit to writing this way is that every time you read it something new can happen! It's all about the power of imagination. Whenever Zetsu talks the bolded words are his dark half and normally written words are his white side. If you see anything that doesn't make sense feel free to tell me by reviews or message!
Thank you - Psychoticmemory