Hey guys! This is my very first story so pleaseee be nice to me? By the way, I am Dutch so the grammar can be wrong, sorry for that!
Disclaimer: Don't own Criminal Minds, wish I did well, maybe, one day, ever, probably not…
So here is the story! Hope you like it :D Please read, if you don't like this chapter: it get's better, promise! :)
An end or a new beginning?
Chapter 1
Third person POV
''Mommy, mommy wake up! We're gonna play today! Remember? In the park!'' Yelled the kid.
''Yeah, I remember buddy, go get dressed! Then we're going to have breakfast and then we can go, but remember, don't put on your new clothes! Otherwise they're going to get filthy, and we don't want that, do we buddy?'' Said his mom who just woke up.
''No! I will put on my old clothes, I don't want filthy clothes!'' The very happy boy replied.
''Okay! Come on, we're going to have breakfast in ten minutes! Hurry up!'' Yelled his mom.
''Kay, kay!'' Said the boy.
''I am done! Let's go now!'' The boy couldn't stop jumping around.
''Okay, okay, I am coming Henry, calm down buddy!'' Said his mom laughing.
''Sorry mommy!''
''Aw, I can't get mad at you, come on, let's go!''
''Agent Hotchner? Could you please look at this case? They asked us personally, so I think we should consider it?'' Asked Strauss.
''Yes, I will look at it in a moment'' answered Aaron Hotchner.
''Okay, I will wait, I want to know if you take it or not'' Suggested Erin Strauss.
''Can I have it?''
''Yes, here you go'' Erin answered and gave the file to Aaron.
''mmh, looks interesting, I will ask JJ to come over, see what she thinks'' Said Aaron.
Erin nodded and left the office, Aaron immediately called JJ.
''Jennifer Jareau''
''Hey JJ, can you come over to look at a case?''
She recognized the voice as her boss, Hotch.
''Uhm, yeah, I guess, but do you mind if I come in about an hour? Henry wants to go to the park first, sorry'' explained JJ.
''No, I don't mind, see you then, the file is on your desk'' answered Hotch.
''Okay, bye''
''Bye''
JJ walked into the BAU office and saw that everyone looked at her. She smiled and fast walked to her office, when she was there, she saw the file and opened it.
Agent Morgan looked confused at Agent Prentiss and then to Doctor Reid.
''I thought she had the day off?'' he asked.
''Yeah, me to?'' answered Reid.
''Maybe she forgot something?'' Suggested Prentiss.
''Maybe'' Morgan and Reid both answered.
JJ looked at the file and decided that it would be the best if they took the case asap. She walked to Hotch and he called everyone for a briefing.
''Three murders in the past week in Houston: Susan Grander on Tuesday, Erika Tuckely on Thursday and Trisha Wascon on Saturday, most likely is that there's going to be a murder today, all the victims were kidnapped and tortured before they died, Susan was kidnapped Sunday, Erika was kidnapped Tuesday and Trisha on Thursday. Saturday night there was a kidnapping reported right in the safety zone of our UnSub.'' Explained JJ. There appeared a picture of the woman that was kidnapped. ''This is Eva Johnsen, her husband reported her missing after she didn't came back from her work, she wasn't at work and fits the profile. She is most likely going to be found today. All woman have blond hair and blue eyes, Susan and Erika were single, but Trisha was married with 2 kids also Eva was married, no kids from her own, but 5 adopted kids''
''So he's escalating?'' Asked Rossi.
''Yes, he is less afraid to kidnap woman that will be missed by somebody very soon''
''Wait? He kills and kidnaps woman on the same day? That's odd…'' Said Prentiss.
''You know that a lot of killers kill one woman and kidnap another? There has been proven that….'' Reid begun but was cut off soon by Rossi.
''Okay, I think we need to go there and look at the crime scenes, maybe there is something useful there?'' interrupted Rossi.
''Yes, but there is one more thing: Al the victims had this carved into their chest'' JJ spoke.
Then there appeared a photo of the carving.
''Numbers? What could they mean?'' asked Prentiss.
''1010? Why 1010?'' wondered Morgan.
''Maybe not 1010, but characters, like a, b or c?'' asked Rossi.
''But there are only 26 characters in the alphabet? How could you explain that? Asked Morgan.
''Maybe, it's not 1010 but 10-10, like two ten's after each other ? suggested Prentiss.
''Okay, two ten's, so that's 2 times the same character? Reid which character of the alphabet is the tenth?'' Asked Hotch.
''J'' answered Reid.
''So that leads us to J and J, maybe the first character of the name? Like John and Jackson?'' said Rossi.
Suddenly JJ froze, she let out a huge gasp of pain and looked from where the pain was coming.
Oooh bit of a cliffhanger….. Sorryyy!
Chapter one is done! Finally! Please review! Let me know if I should continue or not? Or some ideas for the next chapter(s)? Let me know!
Love you all! xx