Author's Note: This is my first fanfic! Hope you guys like it! Please review.

Initiate temporal prison!

Temporal prison initiated!

Suddenly the lights went out in the tardis and everyone looked up.

"They've got us. Power's gone." The Doctor said. "Some kind of chronon loop!" At that the tardis began to shake.

"Transferring tardis to the Crucible!"exclaimed one of the four daleks from outside.

The tardis heaved off the ground and began being pulled skyward with the Doctor, Rose, Jack, and Donna inside it.

"The dalek Crucible." the Doctor said gravely. "All aboard."

The tardis landed with a thud. "The tardis is secured!" screeched a dalek. "DOCTOR, YOU WILL STEP FORTH OR DIE!"

"We'll have to go out. Cause if we don't they'll get in." the Doctor said not looking at the others.

"You told me nothing could get through those doors." Rose said thinking back to satellite 5.

"You've got extrapolator shielding" Jack said confused.

The Doctor finally turned to face them. "The last time we fought the daleks, they were scavengers, and hybrids and mad. But this is a fully fledged dalek empire. At the height of its power, experts at fighting tardises. They can do anything. Right now that wooden door… is just wood."

Suddenly Rose found it hard to breathe and all she could hear was a heartbeat. She could make out muffled voices. "What about you're teleport?"THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP "Went down with the power loss" THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP. Now the beating was so loud she couldn't hear anything. THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP.

Finally the Doctor looked over "Rose?" THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP THUMPTHUMPTHUMPTHUMP. The doctor ran over to her. "ROSE?" he whispered intensely.

The Doctor's voice snapped Rose out of her trance. She gasped finally able to breathe. "Yeah?" she said. What the heck just happened? she thought to herself. "I'm sorry." He says. "There's nothing else we can do." "Yeah." she replies. "Yeah I know." He looked down at her sadly. After all the pain these stupid things have caused his Rose to have, why must they always come back to split them up. He pulls her into a quick hug. I should tell him what just happened to me, but it would only distract himRose thought.

SURRENDER, DOCTOR, AND FACE YOUR DALEK MASTERS!

"Daleks, Ha!" Donna exclaimed.

"Oh no." Jack taunted.

"It's been good though hasn't it? All of us, all of it everything we did…" Rose let out a small smile at the Doctor"s wordS despite the fact that her head was still screaming. " You were brilliant" he says to a smiling Donna. "And you were brilliant." He say to Jack, who gives him a wide grin. "And you were brilliant." He says to her while pulling her into a hug. He finally lets go."Blimey." he mutters walking to the door.

One by one they all walk out of the tardis with Rose standing in the very back. DALEKS REIGHN SUPREME! ALL HAIL THE DALEKS!The thumping starts again, she can't walk. The heartbeat intensifies pounding faster. She hears the Doctor's voice calling "Rose! You're no safer in there." The tardis door slammed shut. That snapped her out of it. "Doctor! Help me!" "No, no, no, no, no, no!" he screamed."WHAT DID YOU DO?!" he yells to what appears to be to command dalek. The both of them are pounding on the door, trying to reach each other.

"This is not of dalek origin."

"Stop it! She's my friend. I need her back! Open the door and let her out!" he cried desperately. He meant it when he said he needed her. Her loved her.

"This is of time lord treachery."

"Please, the door just shut on its own!" he cried. He was starting to panic.

"Nevertheless, the tardis is a weapon, and it will be destroyed!"

The Tardis fell through a trap door. "NO! PLEASE NO!" the Doctor cried. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! BRING THEM BACK!" he started breaking inside. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE? WHERE'S IT GOING?"

"The Crucible has a heart of Z-Nuetrino energy. The tardis will be deposited to the core!"

"But you can't you've taken the defenses down! IT'LL BE TORN APART!"

The tardis suddenly fell through the floor knocking Rose off her feet. "DOCTOR!" The sensation of falling seemed to go on forever. CRASH! The console started burn with searing heat. The windows exploded spitting debris and fire all around her. She tried to regain her balance but only fell again and had the breath knocked out of her. She sat on the ground gasping. She got up and darted across the room away from the doors. Fire shot up everywhere. Rose sat still calling for the Doctor even though she knew he was out of reach. The smoke now filled her lungs and the only thing she could do now was gasp for air.

Then she heard it, the heartbeats again. Rose turned her head to see the Doctor's hand bubbling and glowing with golden energy. She heard a voice that wasn't hers whisper in her head. "Don't worry, you'll be part of the wolf soon."

So I know this first chapter isn't much, but it'll get to be exciting in the next part I promise so please stick with me! I can update daily, but I want to see some reviews first! I may add more to make this chapter better, but I really wanted to get this started! This is going to be very Rose/ 10 so if you don't ship it... YOU'RE WRONG! jk... sort of. But really they're my OTP man. What do you guys think about superwholock? I'll write one if you want me to. Nerdfighter out! ;p