Well, here's the new story I was talking about.


Jord's POV

I was in a middle of a burn battle with this stupid ass Arcanine, trying to burn him with my insults. But whether it was my insults or my Flamethrowers, nothing worked. Not that a Flareon's projectile attacks did anything anyway.

I was never a thug who was constantly getting into street fights, but my friend Josh, a Exploud, convinced me to hang out with the hood. It was something I did not want to do, but he would not stop tormenting me about going, and knowing him, he probably would of made me deaf if I did not agree to come.

The Arcanine eventually burned me to the ground, as I could no longer come up with actual insults on the spot. A Scrafty came up to me.

"Who the f**k are you you little s**t?" He asked. "I'm yo mama's worst nightmare!" I replied trying to get him to back off. "Heh heh.. This place ain't for little flame sacs like you kid, like you have one anyway. In case your little pea brain does not know, I'm the leader here. You better get your scrawny ass outta here, or we'll kick your ass so hard your family will feel it."

My family.. They ditched me years ago. This punk's insults reminded me of them. Combine with the insults thrown at me, it made me feel very mad and very sad. But looking at this Scrafty, I knew I was going to be in some deep s**t if I hung out here any longer. Pushing my emotions to the side, I sprinted out of the place, into the nearest forest.

I felt my emotions flood back towards me, except being mad and sad, I was just pure mad. I started to charge up Flame Charge and collided with a nearby tree at full force, trying to remove whatever anger was inside of me.

I knocked down a few more trees as they were consumed by flames. I was still not satisfied. I was still pissed. This time, I decided to charge up a Flare Blitz, hoping that the recoil will hurt me enough. I was about to charge into a huge rock, but I was stopped by someone with a feminine voice yelling at me to "STOP!"

Daisy's POV

I peacefully laid under a tree in a forest that had many grass and bug Pokemon. I rolled around in the soft grass, simply enjoying all the plant life. I continued to mess around with my surroundings until I look to my left only to see a tree being consumed by flames.

"What the hell?!" I said to myself. I looked around and noticed many Ledyba and Butterfree fleeing the forest, followed by many other Pokemon. Unlike them, I decided to go investigate the event rather than fleeing. I walked towards the flaming tree and hid behind a nearby bush. I noticed that 3 trees have fallen down and been covered in flames. Near them there was a Flareon, who looked like he did not have a very good day. He began charging up what looked like a Flare Blitz, aiming his body towards a huge rock, the Mossy Rock. That rock was the only Mossy Rock in the entire forest, and that rock has been protected by many Pokemon for years. I did not want this guy destroying it. "STOP!" I yelled.


I noticed that the overall writing of this is better than the main story I'm working on, Fateful Love. I'll try make Fateful Love a lot better :)