Hi I' am new to this so I hope you guys like it. If I made a few errors I apologize because this is my first time doing this and am not really good at this but if you guys like it.
I will be glad to get your opinion about my fanfiction and that's about it.
btw the characters are Loki , Jane , Thor , Balder , Fandral , Sif , Hogun and more btw the characters are not mines, they're Marvels Including a New character that I'm putting which Is Baldur( Thor and Loki's extra brother) anyways I hope you guys enjoy It and Happy Holidays to All of you :)
...6 Years Later after Thor left Jane on earth were Jane was...
" So uh let me get this straight your name Is Balder and you wanna work here with me and Darcy? "
" Yes miss uh- "
" It's Jane Foster "
" Right Jane Foster so what can I help you and Darcy with-? "
...Darcy shouts In back of Jane...
" BY GOING ON A DATE WITH JANE! "
" OH MY GOD DARCY WHAT THE HELL'S WRONG WITH YOU?! "
" What I just wanted to help you relax "
" Well you're not helping me concentrate on this experiment "
" Fine whatever Jane "
...Darcy passes by Balder and whispers In his ear...
" Balder "
" Yes Miss Darcy? "
" Ask Jane out on a date because she totally needs to cool off If you know what I mean "
" Oh yes I'll do that "
" Don't let her leave your side ever "
" Why? "
" Because she has a hard core boyfr- "
...Jane Interrupts Darcy...
" Balder do you think I could borrow Darcy for a minute "
" Uh sure go ahead I'll be here looking at your stuff "
" Okay thanks and you are going with me because we need to have a little girl talk "
" What? but why? "
" Come on Darcy "
...Jane grabs Darcy's hands and pulls her towards the door...
" Now that we're alone I wanna tell you something Darcy "
" And what would that be Jane? "
" WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU SETTING UP A DATE WITH BALDER AND ME SINCE YOU KNOW PERFECTLY WELL
THAT I LOVE THOR MORE THAN ANYONE! "
" Yeah right "
" What's that supposed to mean Darcy "
" It means that Thor Isn't the only man you're attracted to and we both know who else you're attracted to "
" Who Darcy? "
" Loki and don't lie to me Jane because you're my best friend and I know when you're lying to Me "
" What you're a total liar why would I fall for Thor's brothe- "
...Balder Interrupts both Jane and Darcy...
" Are you 2 done talking because I was promised a date with miss Foster "
" Oh yes we're done right Jane "
" Fine we're done "
" Now go to your date with Balder I'll day care of everything here "
" Okay Darcy "
" Well bye Miss Darcy "
" Bye Jane and Balder "
...3 Hours Later Outside of Jane's House were Balder was..."
" Miss Foster are you there? "
" Oh yes come In Balder I'll be right there so wait okay "
" Oh okay I'll wait here "
...Jane comes out of her room wearing a green and black dress with a green/black ribbon on her hair...
" Well how do I look? "
...Jane blushes...
" You look beautiful Jane "
" Really? "
" Yeah so shall we go to our date? "
...Jane nods her head...
" Yeah let's go "
...Later on In Asgard were Thor was...
" So Thor are you really going to see that Mortal of yours? "
" Yes Fandral I'll be going In a minu- "
...Sif runs to were Thor and Fandral were...
" Woah Sif what's wrong what's the rush? "
" Thor and Fandral "
" What Is It Sif? "
" He's alive and he's going back to earth to were your Mortal Is! "
" Who Sif? "
" Loki he's alive I just saw him with my own eyes "
" WHAT?! THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE? I SAW HIM DIE IN FRONT OF ME "
" Thor you know me I wouldn't lie to you especially about Loki "
" Fine I believe you so where Is he now? "
" He just left to Earth were your mortal lives "
" Well what are we all waiting for let's go Sif , Fandral , Hogun and Volkstagg "
" Yes let's go "
...Later back on Earth were Jane and Balder were...
" So I was wondering do you have a boyfriend? "
" Well yeah but he left me "
" Oh so you're single "
" Well If you put It like that then yeah I'm single "
" So I was wondering do you wanna be my girlfriend? "
" Woah woah hold it right there "
" What's wrong? "
" I don't think I'm ready for this "
" Don't worry I won't hurt you It's just a kiss "
" Oh okay then kiss me "
" Okay "
...Later on where Loki was...
" Now where Is that Mortal? oh I see her friend "
...Loki gets behind Darcy , grabs her and pushes her towards the wall...
" SPEAK MORTAL WHERE IS SHE AND YOU BETTER TELL ME NOW OR ELSE I'LL KILL YOU NOW TELL MEEEEEEEE! "
" Agh I do-don't know "
" SPEAK THE TRUTH OR ELSE! "
" I swear I do-do-don't know where she Is "
" THAT'S IT YOU WILL TELL ME OR I'LL KILL YOU RIGHT NOW! "
" Fi-fine I'll tell you "
" Good now where Is she? "
" She's In a Res-restaurant with her new boyfriend "
" I can't understand you speak louder "
" Let go of me first "
" Fine as you wish "
...Loki unhands Darcy seeing her catch her breath...
" Now which restaurant Is she? "
" It's called Wendy's "
" Which Wendy's? "
" I'll show you "
" Good Lets go "
...Later where Thor was...
" We're finally on Earth Thor so now where Is she? "
" Let's look around for her "
" Alright Thor "
...Later on where Jane and Balder where...
" Well thank you for the food Balder "
" No Problem Miss Jane "
" Well now what Balder "
" How about a kiss "
" He he okay "
...Jane kisses Balder In the same time that Loki and Darcy arrives...
" HOLY HELL JANE WAIT TO GO GIRL!_ "
...Jane turns around and sees Loki and Jane...
" OH MY GOD DARCY WHY IS LOKI HERE? "
" I came here for you Foster "
" Why Loki? "
" Because you're mine "
" YOU'RE CRAZY LIKE HELL WILL I GO WITH YOU ! "
" He he I like you you're feisty "
...Loki grabs Jane and pulls her close to him making Jane blush and get pissed off at the same time...
" Le-let go off me you bastard! "
" He don't make me do what I want "
" Like what "
" Like this for example "
...Loki grabs Jane and kisses her In her lips In front of Thor...
" LOOOOKIIIIIIII! "
...Loki turns around and sees his brother mad like hell...
" Oh hello brother "
" Loki let go of her "
" Why brother "
" Because I don't want her getting hurt by you so I suggest you let go of her "
" Well alright but on one condition brother "
" And what condition Is that? "
" Fight me If you win I'll never touch or bother your mortal "
" And If you win? "
" If I win Your precious Mortal will belong to me and you'll make me the king of Asgard as well "
" Thor don't do this he's trying to trick you "
" Jane let go I'll play his game after all he's my brother and I will always Love him no matter what "
" Okay Thor good luck "
" Thanks Jane and Loki I'll play your game "
" So Is It a deal brother? "
" Yes Loki Is a deal "
" Then Let's begin our fight "
...To Be Continued...