I'm addicted to the song Ultraviolet at present, so I thought I'd make a fiction out of it. Now I'm unfamiliar on Twilight fiction, so constructive criticism is more than welcome. I thought this song suited Edward's view of Bella, so here it is. Please R & R.
Song: Ultraviolet
Artist: Stiff Dylan's
A/N: This song is from the soundtrack to Angus, Thongs and Perfect Snogging and is YouTube as I understand. Whole story is from Edward's POV.
Bella's like nothing I've ever seen before. Unnaturally beautiful, with this perfection to her features I honestly can't describe. Also, very indecisive, and I can't read her mind, which is mayhem. Very problematic. But I lose myself in her constantly; it's very difficult to keep control around her, because she's got this beautiful, irresistible scent, and the most alluring features in this world of my existence.
She
is a wave and she's breaking
She's a problem to solve
and in
the circle she's making
I will always revolve
She's got the prettiest chocolate-brown eyes, which glitter wickedly. They are so deep, I feel myself drowning in them every time I look into them. Liquid brown, so shimmery, they seem to be more bronze sometimes. It's such a captivating colour, so unique.
And
on her sight
These eyes depend
Invisible and intervisible
She isn't aware of what she does to me. I have this icy natural temperature, but I feel so much hotter with her nearer me. It's not a good thing, neither is it bad. It's like a fire is raging inside me when my heart is, although it's frozen, not beating. She's blinding, Bella Swan, a human, blinds me, a vampire, and even more so, a monster. She's meek, gentle, a lamb. The lion fell in love with the lamb, and it's totally true, I'm madly in love with her.
That
fire you ignited Visions so insane
Good, bad and undecided
Burns when I stand
beside it
Your light is ultraviolet
Traveling unraveling through my brain
Cold when I am denied
it
Your light is ultraviolet
Ultraviolet
When she first arrived in Forks and I told her we shouldn't be friends, the look of despair on her face was unnaturally painful to look at. She was so intrigued by me and the whole family I guess. I mean, look how Alice, Esme and Carlisle respond to her. They adore her. I couldn't keep away though. People naturally thought it was a phase, especially Rosalie, but she's always been hostile towards Bella. It's just natural Rose I suppose.
Now
is a phase and it's changing
It's rotating us all
Thought
we're safe but we're dangling
and it's too far to survive the
fall
What is hard, though, is that constantly, I'm worried that she'll say she can't love a monster, a killer. She constantly tells me she loves me, but it's like I'm hanging on a thread on top of a very tall skyscraper in New York, the Empire State Building even. I wouldn't last without this beautiful girl, I was lost and lonely before she arrived.
And
this I know That
fire you ignited Visions so insane
It will not bend
Invisible and intervisble
Good, bad and undecided
Burns when I stand
beside it
Your light is ultraviolet
Traveling unraveling through my brain
Cold when I am denied
it
Your light is ultraviolet
Ultraviolet
She's
my life. The whole point to my existence, my soul mate. I'd do
anything for her as I love her beyond words. She's so totally
gorgeous, and she doesn't have to try. When she does she's
absolutely dazzling, so stunning she's almost painful to even
glance at. And her smile lights up an entire house, let alone her
room. The delicate blush that covers her skin when she's even
mildly embarrassed is beautiful, makes such a change from me being
surrounded by people with snowy white skin, even if she does find it
perfect. But Bella Swan is more exquisite than the rest of us. That
fire you ignited Visions so insane Your light
is ultraviolet Visions so insane
Good, Bad and undecided
Burns when I stand
beside it
Your light is ultraviolet
Traveling unraveling through my brain
Cold when I am denied
it
Your light is ultraviolet
Ultraviolet
Traveling unraveling
through my brain
Cold when I am denied it
Your light is
ultraviolet
Ultraviolet
Isabella Swan-The human who I can't be without.
So what do you think as a first attempt at Twilight? It was just a basic idea and I'm open to criticism of any form, but would prefer it to be constructive. Reviews make me happy, and happiness equals to new fictions, so you know(hopefully) what to do.
