Yuki- hey guys, so here is the revamped start of this story, its not too different from the first time around, but there have been some changes and more will
show as the story progresses. anyways, please read and enjoy!
disclaimer: I don't own, so no one sue... please I'm flat broke you'd get nothing.
"Riku! Riku, wait up!" Sora shouted. The young, long haired teen in front of Sora slowed, turning his head to shout "catch me if you can Sora-kun!" before running off as if the wind was under his feet.
Riku was sure to win on account of his head start, but stopped when he heard Sora cry out in pain. Looking back to see what the matter was, he was surprised to find an enormous crackling blue portal slowly engulfing his friend.
"Sora, hold on!" he cried, reaching out his hands perchance to catch onto a piece of Sora's clothing with which to pull him to safety.
It was all for not however, for the pull of the force field surrounding the portal was too strong, and the portal proceeded to pull Riku in as well.
When Riku awoke he found Sora next to him in a large bed, and extremely soft bed. he looked around, only to have a young girl pop up right in front of his face.
" Hi, welcome to the land of the living, Yuki-chan is Yuki-chan, who'reyou?wheredoyoucomefrom?whatshisname?areyoutwotogether?" she said, not taking a single breath.
Another girl with white bangs and red hair walked into the room " I'm terribly sorry, my friend forgot to take her medicine today" she announced laughed slightly.
"Hey I don't take any medicine!" Yuki whinged, looking hurt. "anyways, I'm Holli, a friend of Yuki-chan. Nikki, another friend of ours, will be here soon. She went to go get a doctor to check on your friend."
"Why? was he injured?" Riku asked confused, for from where he sat Sora looked perfectly fine. A little banged up maybe, but none worse off then when they sparred. However Holli, at his words, grew perplexed.
"He, is that what you said?" she asked, "yeah his name is Sora" Riku looked at her "why?",
"well, he looks so feminine we thought he was a girl" She smiled sheepishly.
Suddenly footsteps were heard heading towards the room. The door opened and in stepped a brown haired lady with an older man in a white coat.
"hello, my name is Dr. St. Carmichael, now what seems to be the problem?" He asked, looking around at the occupants of the room.
so yeah, that was it. short I know, but what can I say, creativity comes in bursts yanno?
so please review. I don't get paid for this, so your reviews are all that keep me going. also, I enjoy criticism but only if it's constructive. tell me if you don't like something, but tell me why you don't like it also.