Hi! So this probarly has a ton of grammar mistakes since English isn't my native languages! feel free to (please) point out any mistake I make, I'm willing to learn! Actually I'm not really a writer, more of a reader, I still wanted to post this though, give it a try ,see what you think about it so please give me your opinion whether it's postive or not!

Onto the story now


He existed, but he wasn't alive. Not doing things he loved , no ambitions, no big dreams, no future goals. Just someone filling in a shallow corporative job with no passion involved at all. Still he pretended he was living the life showing of the suits, the money, the fancy apartment. Then he met Ted, told him he'd teach him how to live when in reality , he was a lost wandering soul looking for a companion. Slowly he intergrated himself into the little group of friends. Sure it was nice to hang out with them at the bar and have them get to know him, but still he felt.. like an intruder. Cramming his way into the lives of people who had known eachother since college. That's why he started serving the purpose of crazy story teller. He came up with ridiculous schemes and made it his goal to sleep with the entire feminine population of NYC, at least he now had some sort of goal.

However things changed when he met a certain Robin Scherbatsky, immediatly he felt how she challenged him, to be honest he found that (among other things ) quite attractive about her. Which was wrong, totally wrong like more wrong than saying you 'suited up' when in reality your wearing a blazer. She's Ted's , just like the stupid blazer. But apparently the night she invited him over to watch her 'Sandcastles in the sand' video but they ended up doing entirely different stuff, turned him into a lame gluey character right out of a storybook ( well ,except for the PG13 rating(whaddup!)) cause if this meant being wrong, he didn't want to be right. And no that will never ever be said out loud, yikes.

It's funny how sometimes life throws you challenges when you need them most. It's funny really how sometimes such a challege means overcoming obstacles you never thought you'd face. In the end it's all worth it though, he thinks as she says 'I do' and pushes a gold band engraved with the word 'Sparkles' on his finger.

Challenge completed.


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