It Came Chapter 1
This popped into my head in English, I shall be continuing it soon.
The snow came. It came down covering the unsuspecting pedestrians in a haze of frost. It came down in a torrent, never stopping, never slowing. It came down mercilessly not saving anyone from its mission on cold and damp. It came down.
It came down over the majority of England, Scotland and Wales; it came down at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The winter term may have ended leaving behind the joys of Christmas and Hanukah behind, but it didn't stop the cold icy winds from the North Sea attacking hands and faces of unhappy children.
So once more we see the pupils of the famous school as they scurry to lessons through the dimly lit corridors to dimly lit classrooms, slip to the forest to learn about the dangers of magical creatures, and shuffle towards the Quidittich Field where Practices and matches are held.
Attempting to fly a broom was not easy for most at the best of times, but for a certain red head know as Lily Anne Evans it was a challenge, especially in the blizzard that was slowly consuming her figure.
So if at that moment you happened to gaze out of one of Hogwarts windows you might have seen her, broom slung over one shoulder, hair a whirl with the wind grasping a broom. Or you may have saw a load of trees with a flock of birds overhead, it really depended what window you were looking out of.
But fortunately, Miss Evans admirer did not have the panoramic view of a forest, no he had the Quidditch Stand, and his so called prey.
Who couldn't love the charms and elegant beauty of her, he had certainly never denied his love to anyone, least of all her. It had been 4 years, and now that they only had a few short months left together he knew he had to get a move on.
So as she mounted her broom and flew around with ease and delicateness that was entirely her own he allowed himself a small grin, and a last fleeting look before he tore his gaze away.
After all, he knew how much she hated to be watched.
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Jennifer.