Hello everyone!

This is the very first chapter of my first story ever! I decided I wanted to write this after I reread a some fanfiction. I just thought I would give it a try. And well, this is what came out of it.

I would like to say thanks to a couple of writers before the story begins.

Ziltoid, you are one of the biggest reasons I started writing. Your story 'The Honoured Guest' is one of the main reasons I started to scribble down notes for my own story. It just blows me away.

TheDaedalusGun, the way you describe things is just amazing. It is as if I am reading a Sherlock Holmes book. I really wish I could do that. It is a example of how the smaller things can become big when written down properly.

AeroZalen, 'Naruto of the Scorched Leaf' showed me how epic a story can become. The way you write jutsu is just mindblowing.

If there are any mistakes pls pm me and i will fix the issue. I hope you like my story! R&R.

Dreckman

"speech"

thoughts

"Kyuubi speech"

Kyuubi thoughts


Once upon a time in a land far away there was a great village called Konoha. In this ninja village lives a young boy named Naruto Uzumaki. He was just seven years old, yet he was the village pariah for reasons unknown to him. It was as if people hated him for his very existence. But on the first of October people seemed to hate him even more, on his birthday no less. This boy was currently running for his life...

Naruto looked around from his hiding place. It seemed he managed to shake of the mob. For now at least. Why do they always need to pick on me, and why do they always stare at me with those cold eyes. It is as if my very existence is rejected by these people. NO! I can't think like this. I will become Hokage and then everyone will have to acknowledge me!

But than a villager saw him. He looked at Naruto and the blond looked back. Suddenly the villager begun to scream! "He is here, the demon is here"! O fuck Naruto thought as he quickly ran away.

He jumped over a food stand and under slid under someones legs, but he was just too slow as the mob was catching up on him. "Dammit" Naruto yelled as he trampled and fell to the ground.

He managed to get up at run again, but he was slowed down by a bruise on his leg. He quickly turned in an ally. As he ran in he discovered he made a big mistake. It was a dead end. He turned around only to see the angry group of people. He had no way out.

There was pain, and lots of it. As if there was just no end to the misery. It only became worse. People were beating, stabbing and cutting him with everything they could until he was at an inch of his live.

And then everything went black.


Confused young Naruto looked around. It seemed he was in some sort of sewer. Water came till his ankles yet he didn't feel wet. He felt a dark presence. He decided to look what it was. As he explored the sewer he found a large room with iron bars at the and. On the bars was a paper with the kanji for 'seal' on it. But the dark feeling he had came from behind the bars.

As he closed in he suddenly saw to red slitted eyes. A large roar filled the room. Naruto had to cover his ears but it was no use. The sound was just to powerful. And than it ended just as sudden as it begun. Naruto screamed in fright but he didn't move.

Then a growling voice filled the room. "Why are you not running kid, do you not know who I am?"

Naruto just looked on with eyes filled with terror. Than he stuttered: "You, you a a are the ky ky Kyuubi".

"That is right kid, it is I the mighty Kyuubi. The strongest of all tailed beasts!" He growled as he swung his nine tails with pride.

"B b but where a a am I? I m m mean we." Naruto asked the Kyuubi.

"We are in your mind scape kid" said Kyuubi. But when Naruto looked at him with confused eyes he said: "We are in your mind. Now if you were as kind to come a little closer" the fox said.

But when Naruto came closer a huge fang suddenly scratched his head. Naruto screamed and quickly took a few steps back as the Kyuubi laughed.

"WHAHAHAHAHAHA, such stupidity can only be expected from a human!" The fox kept on laughing for a while as Naruto watched on in terror.

"But wait. If I am in my mind, and you are in my mind than... You are in me!" Naruto said to the laughing fox.

"That is right young one. I am inside of you. Kept back by this accursed seal."

"But that is impossible, the Yondaime defeated you seven years ago! You are supposed to be dead, so how can you be here?"

The fox swept his tails angrily as he squinted his eyes when he said: "I am very much alive, don't doubt that. Your village has lied to you all this time. But if you remove that seal I can assure you of revenge. Think about it, I will give you all my power if you just remove the seal!"

"No!" Naruto yelled. "I will not let you destroy Konoha! I will become hokage and everyone will have to respect me. Believe it!"


In the hokage's office three anbu stood in front of Hiruzen Sarutobi.

"Go help Naruto" he ordered.

The three anbu were gone.

'I hope he will be okay' Hiruzen thought as he looked in his crystal ball.

And that was it! My first chapter. I hope you liked it.

I know this chapter might seem slow. And I know there is a lot of dialogue in it. But since this is the first time I write a story like this I simply don't have the experience to have more descriptions of surroundings and other things like that. I just can't write them good. Yet.

But I plan to make something of this story so I will improve a lot, I hope.

As you can see I made my story a bit darker than the original story. And that has a reason. I just don't think it is logical to hide behind a smile. So this Naruto will seem to be less happy, but I don't think the original was that happy either, he just hid his anger and sadness. This Naruto won't do that, not as much as the original anyway.

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Dreckman