This is my first fanfiction so can you please review and tell me if im doing ok.
Disclaimer: i sadly dont own twilight only the awesome steph myers can say they do :(
I was sitting in the meadow surrounded by the long grass and flowers that show themselves during the spring time. I could feel the magic in the meadow that awoken when we were here. Me and Edward that is. I looked over to see his skin sparkling like diamonds embed in his skin I have seen it many times but I am always breathless when I see it. I look into his eyes a honey golden colour that he and his family have. Oh did I tell you also his family are vampires.
I wanted to be like him. To live forever. To love him for eternity. but no I will not become a soulless monster like he thinks he is. He sees being what he is a curse, but I see it as a gift – a gift to be with the person that you love forever.
He looks up into my eyes. I view his beautiful honey golden ones while he sees my boring brown ones. I look at his full pink lips, his pale white skin, his untidy bronze hair and his boyish face. Where I am just a boring human with average looks – well my skin is nearly as pale as his is.
"What are you thinking about?" He said shaking my trance of his beauty. I was starting to think that was his new phrase 'What are you thinking about' because he can't read my thoughts.
"Just how much better you look than me," I said truthfully, he could always tell if I was lying. So I might as well tell the truth.
"Bella do you not grasp how beautiful you look? You are like a goddess. An angel sent from heaven."
I was about to say something when a sudden noise came from the forest surrounding the meadow. A branch snapping under someone's foot. I looks around the outskirts of the meadow. Edward was first to react when he came towards me ever closer than we had been before and shielded my body from the sound. I could hear soft footsteps coming closer to the meadow.
I heard a hiss come from Edward "Who is it Edward?" I asked but before he could answer I had my answer in front of my eyes.
He grabbed Edward by the arm and threw him across the meadow making him crash into trees that fell as soon as he hit them. He ran at vampire speed to where he crashed and ripped his arm off. I screamed for his life. And started to run towards him to help when felt someone yanked my hair and sent me tumbling to the ground. I started to scream out but felt hands over my mouth. I tried to break out of the gip they had on me but it was no use. They pushed me onto ground hitting my head on a rock sticking out of the ground. I felt wetness in my hair and it started to drip down my back and onto the ground. I turned to face Edward who was held looking at me but a vampire obviously because his skin was sparkling in the sunlight his hair cut shag yang hung around his ears. His eyes sparkling red meaning he just fed.
"Hello Bella we meet again I see," said the person standing behind me. I turned my head slightly to see them. There were two female vampires standing there one with dark hair and another with blazing red hair. I saw the person who spoke and my heart beat sped up with fear.
"Hello Bella I am Maria," said the dark haired one with a slight smile. And that was the last thing I saw before blacking out.
So please reiview and see my new poll
Thanx
XOXO
Izzy
