Note: This is my first fanfiction that I did not delete.


The Thundermans are in Hiddenville.

Hank: Max, Phoebe, Billy, Nora, Chloe. Time to have a "normal" breakfast.

Phoebe, Bill, Nora, and Chloe run to the table and eat as fast as they can.

Phoebe: Done. Now to save the world.

Phoebe opens the door with her hands.

Billy: Come on Nora. lets play laser tag.

Nora lasers Billy

Billy: Ow! This is fun.

Nora: *zaps Billy* I'm gonna get you.

Chloe teleports.

Hank: Hey Barb, I feel like we're missing someone.

Barb: Who? Oh.

Barb and Hank: Max!

Hank: I'll get him.

Hank opens the door.

Hank:Max!

a very loud sneeze makes Hank jump.

Barb: Hank?

Hank: I think something's wrong with Max.

Phoebe: Yeah right. He's probably working on an evil thing.

Max: I'm not...Ah-Choo! Evil anymore.

Barb puts her hand over Max's head.

Barb: Alright Max, no school for you today.

Max: But my band. Allison.

Barb: You'll see Allison when you're better.

Colosso: Oh that sucks Max. Well at least you can talk to me. And hey we get along well.

Max lies down in his bed. Meanwhile at Hiddenville High school...

Oyster: Where is he? We have do a new song.

Gideon: Hey remember that song Bonus Toe?

Oyster: Yeah.

Wolfgang: Wolfgang.

Oyster: Wolfgang's right. We can't do the band without Max.

Cherry: Wow. They miss Max.

Phoebe: They'll get over it.

Five minutes later, Oyster, Gideon, and Wolfgang are sitting by lockers, very upset.

Cherry: Oh come on guys. Maybe Max has some very important things to do.

Back in The Thunderman's house, Max's cold is messing everything up. Max is resting on the couch.

Colosso: Wow. Look at this chaos. I love it. You got evil in you.

Max tries to block out Colosso.

Hank: Colosso! You pooped in my shoes again!

Barb: Hank! Shh!

Hank: oh sorry Max. Alright Colosso, the two of us need to talk.

Hank picks up Colosso and leaves.

Hank: Thunderman away!

Hank breaks part of the house that wakes Max up.

Max: Finally. Thanks Dad.

Then Max's phone rings.

Max: hello?

Phoebe: Max you have to get here. Your band needs you. Max? Max are listening?

Max is holding the phone and snoring. Back at school, Phoebe tells Max's friends the news.

Phoebe: Okay. He's not answering.

She hangs up the phone.

Cherry: Well see you guys later.

Back at the Thunderman's house, Chloe came home from preschool.

Chloe: Hey Max.

Max wakes up.

Max: Chloe?

Chloe: How are you feeling?

Max: Awful.

Then Billy and Nora chase each other.

Max: and now I feel worse.

He lies back down and closes his eyes. Then he sneezes and something falls. Phoebe comes in and catches the object before it breaks.

Barb: nice catch.

Phoebe: Where's Dad?

Barb: he's dealing with Colosso.

Phoebe: Did Colosso poop in the shoes again?

Barb: yep.

Phoebe: So how's Max?

Chloe: He's not feeling well.

Billy: race you to the couch!

Nora: oh you're on.

Phoebe: Oh no. Billy, Nora, no!

Billy and Nora both jump on the couch where Max was.

Max: hey! Phoebe!

Phoebe: That's what I was trying to warn you about. Sorry Max.

Max: I'm going back into my room.

Max takes his pillow and blanket and walks back to his room.

Hank: Now no more pooping in my shoes.

Colosso: I'll try not to.

Billy and Nora are watching a TV show. In Max's room, Colosso enters.

Colosso: Hiya Max!

Max: Oh not you again.

Max sneezes and then puts the blankets over himself.

Phoebe: Max? Max can you...

She sees Max is asleep.

Phoebe: Okay maybe this isn't a good time. Oops.

Colosso: Oh Phoebe, I left a little present in your shoe.

Phoebe: Dr. Colosso!

She leaves Max's room and runs upstairs. Nora comes down.

Nora: Alright Colosso, we had it. Do it Billy.

Chloe: yay Billy!

Billy: Alright Dr. Colosso. I'm going to do something that no one has done before.

Colosso: No. wait what are doing? Wait I'm sorry I pooped in your shoes.

Billy throws Colosso out the window then Hank and Barb come in.

Hank: Billy, Nora, Chloe. Did you throw Colosso out the window?

Billy: yeah.

Barb: What were you thinking!? He's going to escape!

Hank: okay. Billy and Nora you go one way, Phoebe and Chloe go the other way. We'll stay here.

Outside, Colosso is running.

Colosso: yes I'm free! *gasps*

Oyster: What's this? A rabbit.

Colosso: Oh no. help! Max!

Gideon: A talking rabbit.

Oyster: I saw we keep it.

Colosso: No wait! Max!

Wolfgang: it knows Max's name.

Phoebe: oh no. Chloe, get Billy and Nora. they have to see this.

Chloe teleports to Billy and Nora. Four minutes later Billy, Nora, and Chloe come to Phoebe.

Phoebe: look!

Billy: isn't that Dr. Colosso?

Nora: of course it is! We have to tell Max!

Max is awake in bed.

Max: it's quiet without Colosso bugging everyone. Phoebe! Billy! Nora! Chloe! Where is everyone?

Max gets up and calls Phoebe. Phoebe is running after Oyster, Gideon, and Wolfgang then her phone rings.

Phoebe: hello?

Max: Phoebe! Where are you?

Phoebe: Max! I'm outside chasing after your band members.

Max: Any reason?

Phoebe: After Billy threw Dr. Colosso out of your window, he ran away and now your band members have him. Are you feeling better?

Max: Um...sort of? Hold on Phoebe. I feel like I need to sneeze.

Max grabs a tissue and sneezes into it.

Max: Nope. Still sick.

Phoebe: Well you take it easy and we'll catch Colosso.

Max: Okay.

Max hangs up the phone and blows his nose. Phoebe hangs up the phone and catches up to her siblings.

Phoebe: Oyster! Gideon! Wolfgang!

Billy: Wow. How does Phoebe know Max's band members names?

Nora: I don't know Billy, but right now we have to save Dr. Colosso.

Oyster: Oh hey Phoebe. Is this your bunny?

Phoebe: yes!

Oyster: Here.

Oyster hands Colosso over to Phoebe.

Colosso: Finally.

Max went back to sleep and Phoebe came in.

Phoebe: Max, I got...again bad timing.

She puts Colosso down and then takes a picture of her sick brother.

Phoebe: See yah Max.

She leaves.

Colosso: hey Max! I'm back.

Max: Colosso, I'm trying to sleep.

Colosso: Sorry. Well feel better.

Max: Thanks.