Our Love

Looking at the dark past, the grey sky shedding its tears

At that time, you always gave me your warm embrace

The tenderness from you that I couldn't forget

But now I can't feel that tenderness anymore

That strong and warm feeling's gone along with you

Nobody could give the same feelings that you gave to me

Our love has gone and will never return

Now I'm facing this cold world and searching a key of freedom

Hoping someday, I'll be freed from this tied down world forever…


I know it's not as good as the For My Love one. Cause I made this poem by myself. For My Love is a poem that I made but the one who translate For My Love was my bro. So the good reviews about it are belongs to him. This poem is inspired by F.I.R song Wo Men De Ai. Give me your honest review please.