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New story: Kate's life (Please give me better suggestions please this title sucks)

Summery-

4 years after Breaking dawn part 2. Kate is Paul's cousin but he doesn't know Kate is a Half vampire half wolf (I'll explain at the end) They are outlawed and that the only thing Vampires and shapeshifters have in common the need to kill them. But Seth imprints on her can that help protect her and her pack from the Wolf pack, what about the Vulture.

About the Mix breeds

There are different types First generation, second, third, and so on. First generations are made when a male vampire and female (must have wolf gene) get together. Second are made when a first generation get with a male vampire/wolf or female with the gene, and so are thought to not be able to control their thirst but if they don't hunt it stay ok. On their 18th birthday they become super strong super fast and can't control their thirst(only that day) if they make it through that day without feeding they go back to normal. They have normal colored eyes unless they feed or if they get angry then they are red. If they get angry they get stronger, faster, and their abilities are heightened. They each have 2 abilities.

Mix breed pack+their abilities(before name age, after generation.

16 Kate 2- Control time(Go back go forward pause, just see what will or has happened to anyone. Slow down speed up) and telekinesis

15 Jackson/Jaks 2- Controls fire/creates fire(can't create fire on a person) and force field

15 Emily/Ems 2- Controls water and force field

16 Colin 2- Pain and turns ghost like(Dispers with a puff of white smoke and can rome around like that. Can't be touched)

10 Nelin 1- Phase and pushes out whatever emotion

13 Jasper(After Jasper his father knew him before) 1- X-ray vision and controls peoples body

4 Sarah 1- Make people see feel and hear things and controlling(If you look her in the eyes she can make you do whatever she wants.

11 Maki 2- Turn into whatever material and if he touches hand with his twin they form together to get bigger

11 Shilah 2- Turn into whatever material and if he touches hand with his twin they form together to get bigger

Relatives:

Kate-Paul cousins

Ems-Jaks siblings twins

Shilah- Maki Siblings twins (also know as the identicals)

Nelin- Jasper siblings

Sarah no one knows