This is my very first fan fiction. All criticisms are welcome.

Any ideas on how to improve my writing are welcome also.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Vampire Academy or its characters, they belong to Richelle Mead.

Prologue:

Love never lasts. This is something I learnt long ago. My parents; well their love was a joke.

My father never loved my mother, or so my aunt says when I visited her on her deathbed. My mother is dead too. Died just after I was born, leaving me to be raised by my cheating ass of a mobster father.

I am told that I am just like my father. Some say I am worse. They say I have no mercy, no concept of pain. I fight for what I want until I get it, no matter the cost.

My father was so disappointed that I was a girl. But I learnt behind his back. He wanted a son. I became a warrior. My father put me through countless tests, and I did them, I passed them all, I wanted him to be proud to have me for a daughter, but he couldn't even do that no matter what I did to please him.

So when my aunt told me I had a brother and a sister I decided to find them. You see I have siblings, yes they both maybe dhamphirs but they are my family.

My father soon learnt that I was not to be tormented, and how uncaring I could be. I asked him about them and when he smiled at me telling me that a stupid girl like me doesn't need to know, well let's just say he soon told me.

I was given two names: Rosemarie Hathaway and Hunter Jones. If you were wondering how I got those names out of my father, well I guess I am worse than him, I tortured my father to get those names.

I am Carramaena Mazur and I am off to find my family, starting with my brother Hunter.