Century Angels

Hey u pples! Yeah, another story from the newbie.  This time its about Angelic Layer. Hope u like it! Beware I changed something! C'mon of course! ^.^ (evil glint) Maybe I'll tell u. NAH!!! That'd b no fun!

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Character thinking = =

Talking "" (DUH!!!)

Hikaru*- Human Hikaru

Hikaruh- Angel Hikaru

Chapter 1

Tokyo, Japan

* Scream * The crowd roared as the announcer welcomed Hikaru*, the renowned five time winner of the World Angelic Championship (which happens every three years) and the best angel maker in the world.

"Now is Misaki's chance to prove herself a super strong deus," the announcer cried, "by having an angelic fight with Hikaru*!"

Hikaru* appeared at the stage entrance. Ohjiro gasped. = She's here! =

Misaki blushed when Hikaru* wished her good luck and sat down at the layer. Immediately she jammed on her gear, tensely. = This is our chance to win it all, Hikaruh! =

"ANGELIC FIGHT!!!" the announcer boomed. * YEH!!! *

Misaki focused on the layer. = ATTACK, Hikaruh, with Rolling Thunder! =

Hikaru* saw a blur of red and white comings towards Hikari, her angel. = You know what to do, Hikari. Frequency, fire-thunder shield! =

Immediately, Hikari sent frequency on the ground, producing a wind shield. Then she added some static electricity from her cord to create electricity and tiny flames from sparks. When Hikaruh hit it a few seconds later, she bounced backwards, receiving a lot of damage.

Misaki gasped. = Hikaruh! =

Hikaru* mourned quietly in her heart. Isn't it obvious that she loves angels and cares for them? = Hikari, spin kick! =

Hikari reacted quickly and sent recovering Hikaru off the layer.

"Wow!" the announcer yelled. " Just a matter of seconds and the fight is over!"

Hikaru* threw off her gear and ran over to Misaki.

"Is your angel okay?" Hikaru* asked. "Never mind, I'll heal her."

She pulled Misaki outside. Katoro-chan and Ohjiro jogged after them when they saw them leaving.

"You were amazing, sis!" Katoro-chan exclaimed. "You…"

"Hey!" Ringo called. "Whose side are you on? Oh yeah, Misakichi, great job even though you didn't win."

"Did you say 'sis', Katoro-chan?" Misaki asked.

"Oh, I forgot!" Katoro-chan replied. "Meet my sister, Hikaru* Yusuki."

When they turned around, they saw Ohjiro quietly speaking to Hikaru*.

"You did great," Ohjiro said, brushing a strand of hair from her face. Hikaru* grew hot.

"Umm, sis?" Katoro-chan said.

Suddenly Hikaru* and Ohjiro snapped out of their trance.

"Oh here," Hikaru* said, giving cards both Ohjiro and Misakichi. "Both of you are going to be in this year's Championship."

"What's that?" Ringo asked, x-amining the card.

"It's a competition for the top four deuses in each country," Ohjiro explained. "This year, the United States, which is one of the top countries (besides Japan) in Angelic Layer, is hosting the Championship. They r usually in second or third place since Hikaru* and Hikari r unbeatable!" No angel can even touch Hikari!!!!"

Hikaru* tapped Ohjiro's shoulder and quietly whispered, "Get back on topic!!!"

"When is this Championship?" Misakichi asked.

"In two days," Ohjiro and Hikaru* replied in unison.

"But don't worry," Hikaru* continued. "I got a time lot for us to practice and help your angel improve her tactics. Besides you're not the only one that is new. Athena is a newbie 2. We'll b practicing together since there r team deus fights."

"Anyway," Ohjiro said, "there are practice centers at the competition. Your plane ticket is in a special pocket in your invitation. Don't loose it!"

"Thanks!" Misakichi said. "So when will we practice?"

Looks like now hope has arrived! Will Misakichi b able 2 prove herself worthy of a great title? U'll c next time!