Spongy Love: Revised

Summary- A new girl comes to Bikini Bottom and Spongebob falls for her, but she's more than looks. Could the gang get that through his head and why does Sandy have sudden hatred towards her?

I don't own Spongebob, Patrick, Squidward, Sandy, Plankton, Gray, Pearl, or Mr. Krabs

But I do own Ailani

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It was a regular day at the Krusty Krabs where many fish in Bikini Bottom ate the famous Krabby Patty. There worked the always cheery Spongebob Squarepants. Anyway outside the kitchen was Squidward barely awake when a beautiful angel fish came in.

"Hello sir." She said sweetly. She was gold angelfish with big beautiful blue eyes with light pink eyeshadow and big red lips.

"May I take your order?" Squidward asked not looking up from his magazine.

"One of your finest Krabby Patties, a thing of French Fries, and Coke." She said gracefully.

"Okay it'll be ready in a few." Squidward said hanging up the paper on a paperclip that's attached to a long piece of string.

"So you must be Squidward?" She asked with a small smile.

"Yes I am," Squidward said proudly, "Are you offering me a contract of my excellent clarinet performance?"

"No. I just saw your nametag." She said stating the obvious as Squidward frowned.

"Oh. Your food will be here momentarily." Squidward said pulling out a magazine.

"Mr. Squidward show our guest to her table." Mr. Krabs ordered from his office as Squidward groaned and sat his magazine down.

"Ugh fine Mr. Krabs. Follow me." Squidward as he led the girl to Table #5.

"Thank you." She said as she sat down.

"Your welcome," Squidward grumbled as he left, "Spongebob where's #5's order!"

"Just ready Squidward. You can't rush perfection." Spongebob said as coming out with the ordered.

"I'm not rushing perfection, I'm rushing you! Table 5 and make it quick we have a lot of orders!" Squidward ordered as Spongebob left.

"Thank you." She said as Spongebob found himself into a trace.

"You're...welcome. Have we met before?" Spongebob asked as she giggled.

"I don't think so. I'm Ailani. I've just moved to Bikini Bottom." Ailani said taking a small bite of her Krabby Patty and Spongebob took noticed as if it was most beautiful thing alive.

"You know if you want I could show you around." Spongebob said in an almost flirty way.

"Don't you have to work?" Ailani asked slightly confused.

"I got my ways." Spongebob said.

"Okay after I'm done eating." Ailani said as Spongebob went to Mr. Krabs office.

"What may I do for you me boy?" Mr. Krabs asked.

"Mr. Krabs may I take the rest of the day off?" Spongebob begged as Mr. Krabs started laughing.

"Now why would you want to do that?" Mr. Krabs laughed whipping a tear from his eye.

"Because I met this girl and I told her I'd show her around Bikini Bottom." Spongebob said.

"Who?" Mr. Krabs asked.

"Table 5." Spongebob said as Mr. Krabs opened the door and saw the angel fish.

"Well me boy I say you got yourself a lady. Beautiful one to say the least. Sure. Just have fun. Tell me everything about it tomorrow me boy." Mr. Krab said.

"Thanks Mr. Krabs," Spongebob said as he saw Ailani cleaning up, "You ready?"

"Yes." Ailani said as the two left much to Squidward's anger.

"MR. KRABS!" Squidward roared as Mr. Krabs ran in.

"Yes Mr. Squidward?" Mr. Krabs asked.

"How could you let Spongebob leave like that?" Squidward spat with his arms crossed.

"Did you see her? The lad needs a lass like that on his claw." Mr. Krabs said.

"I seen her. So what?" Squidward spat.

"He needs someone to make him happy. He's growing up." Mr. Krabs said proudly.

"Well who's going to make the patties?" Squidward demanded.

"Hey you do you know how to make Krabby Patties?" Mr. Krabs asked a random fish.

"Well..." The man started.

"Good. You're hired for the day!" Mr. Krabs shouted.

"But wait I have kids to watch." He said.

"Stop dilly-dallying around and get to work!" Mr. Krabs snapped pushing the man in the kitchen.


I've decided to make a revised version of Spongy Love because I was reading the original I made and seen a lot of typos, the format I wrote it in, and well I just didn't like it as just much I did when I first wrote it. Anyway please read and review