CHAPTER 1' What about it.'

Hey! There guys. If you read this story of mine, can you tell how good and bad is it. And, yeah, remind me of my wrong grammars. Thankie.

BREEZY P.O.V

As I woke up by a purple noisy clock as I turn off and the time, it was 5:30 in the morning. Still early. I got up in my bed and open my reddish door. *yawn* I go in front of the next door, It was reddish like mine and have a name 'BERNADETH'. I knocked the door to wake my best friend, but no one answer, the other door beside my room opened. "*yawn* She's in down stair now" said my other best friend, she have a blonde hair and wearing a sleeping gown. "Oh .." I said. I and my blonde best friend go in down stair. I saw Bernadeth , she has brown hair tied in ponytail of a rubber band and wearing a blue baggy pants and a green polo checkered shirt and beside her was my other best friend, Yes I have three best friend, Bernadeth the green one, Buffle the blonde one , and Bailey the black haired one tied in a ponytail like bernadeth and have a yellow stretchable hair band and wearing a yellow fitted shirt that printed 'BE HAPPY ' and a brown short shorts . "Hey!, you two must get ready too." Said bell, hanging a food to the table "and don't forget to wash your dishes. Breezy, I put you in charged of that, you will wash one of those, while me and Bernadeth going to school earlier." Continue bell. "Why?" asked Buffle. "We have to help Miss. Greenhold" Bernadeth answered back. And they get their little bag, Bernadeth have a small green back pack, printed with a white heart on the side, while Bailey have a yellow body bag and they begin to leave.

7:00 in the morning, the two girls walk in the school hallwayin third floor, "what'ya think their doing ,Breezy " asked the blonde hair girl, wearing a baby blue tube and baby blue skirt with yellow tangled line printed and a blue boots. AND HAIR TIED IN two pigtails and have a baby blue back pack "Helping Ms. Greenhold ." answered back of the dark purple hair girl tied in half high ponytail with use of her small bow, wearing a pink long sleeve polo with tie on it, a pink plain school skirt, a knee socks and black shoes. And have a purple, pink and black shoulder bag "No.. I mean, yes their helping Ms. Greenhold, but why are they so early to come in here, I mean it's still closed in 5:00 in the morning ." said buffle in disbelief. "yeah.. you're right, I didn't even notice that" said Breezy noticing their school 'what time it was open'. "Hey, guys!" shouted the girl in a hall passing them. "Oh. Hi, Bernadeth!" Breezy greeted back. "So what do you have there?' asked Bernadeth."Huh? Where?" Breezy said searching to what she had."Silly. what's your subject for the day?" asked Bernadeth in a laugh tone."Oh, right.*looks at the paper she had*well I have science for the first subject."Hey! same here!" shouted Buffle in a happy tone."Hey, we four have science for today." said Bernadeth."Who's the fourth one?" asked Breezy."Bell." Bernadeth answered back.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Hey guys. I'll just stop here. So remember to remind me of my wrong grammars. And what do you say to my first story in the computer.