Yo! This will be my first story so be harsh but not too harsh, (your complaints help me write better :D)
currently looking for a beta to help me with this (my grammar sucks)
Disclaimer: I do not own swtor or anything in it, though all OCs are of my sick little creation
Birth of the Templars
Location...Linston Spaceport
She reached up a hand to touch his cheek. "What is wrong, my love?" She asked. Malgus replied with a pained and emotion filled voice "That I love you is what is wrong,
Eleena." and with a quick thrust, Malgus stabbed his saber into his lovers chest, into her beating heart. As he withdrew his lightsaber, Malgus's tears grew, and his lovers
body fell upon his own. He took hold of her and with a voice full of pain, sadness, and anger he screamed to the heavens the sound of the voice more beast then man.
Location...Unknown
A dark figure stood over a freshly made grave and on the head stone the name Eleena Daru stood out clearly. "Eleena, my love, I'm so sorry." the clouds heavy, black, and
crying, hovered in the sky soaking the being born as Veradun now known as Darth Malgus. Malgus looked at the grave he had dug with nothing more then his bare hands,
the same hands that had also slain the one the grave was dug for.
He knew that what he had done was right, for though he was a Darth that only gave you more power then the rest, nothing more, and power was always sought out by
other sith, even other Darths. He had his enemies both in the republic and the Empire, and he knew that if either of them found out just exactly how close him and Eleena
were, well he knew that the republic was just as bad as the empire behind closed doors, and he knew what the empire would have done to her. But, he loved her, not
love powered by lust as was with most sith, but true pure love. Malgus had put the monstrous cold hearted act on before her when she brought up the idea of having
more, he actually wanted the same, he wanted it since he first caught sight of her, but he knew that you just don't quit being a sith, especially a Darth that was asking for
trouble not just from a lord or two but the entire dark council. Darths knew to much of the inner workings of the empire just one of them could change the control of entire
planets should they join the republic, so any rouge Darths were taken out as soon as they became a threat.
Though Malgus still had dreams of what it would be like to have a real life with Eleena, disbight that his common sense said other wise. He dreamed of a home, away from
the war, where he and his pregnant Eleena sat outside and watched as their eldest son played with his sister, with no care or worry in the world, and he was happy with
everything. Then however it would change from a paradise to a nightmare, for then republic soldiers would shoot his son who's face had been warped by the powers of
the darkside, his hand just above his lightsaber, his daughter would be sliced down by one of his fellow Darths her body having bruises every were and looking twice its
age, covered only in the most perverted of outfits and looked as if it was more rags then any thing else. Then he would "see" himself stand and face Eleena, she would
look at him with fear, hurt, and betrayal, he would grab his lightsaber and stab her in her swollen belly. As she cried in pain and anguish he would hear a laugh so sinister
he would think it was the darkside itself given form, and it would increase in its darkness with madness now in it as the monster withdrew his blade from her and then
swung it at her neck ending her.
Putting aside his thoughts Darth Malgus slowly turned away from the grave and started to tread back to his ship, the council meeting was called not so long ago and
though he had some lea way in time since he was in republic space he shouldn't be too late, or people would start to suspect something.
Location...Eleena's grave.
As Malgus left a shadow fell upon Eleena's grave. The Shadow stood still and silent but clearly had a powerful air about it. The shadow moved for only a second to see if
Malgus had gone far enough away to do its job without interruptions coming from him. When it was sure that Malgus was far enough away it began. Not long after the
shadow moved away from the newly un-dug grave and with it the object of its masters desire. One piece had been recovered and with it a second in the works. The chess
game between the republic and empire is at a standby for now, but soon a new player will join, and with it, the universe will forever change. For the dawn of a new era is
coming, and all that is needed is the perfect time to control the board.
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