AN: I am re-writing this chapter and the next because I think the beginning of this fic needed to be more interesting. Agreed?
Chapter 3 and 4 are going to stay short (and crappy in my opinion :P) though.

Ages for this chapter:
Peter: 12
Susan: 11
Edmund: 8
Rosalina: 8
Lucy: 6

Chapter One (Re-written)

Rosalina's POV:

I could feel the tears streaming down my face. I didn't want to move to a new house, but daddy got a new job in London. I stood there in the middle of the empty living room, all the furniture in our house had been put in the moving van. I guess it's time to say goodbye I thought sadly. I stepped outside and saw Peter, Susan, Lucy and Edmund and their mother and father standing outside saying goodbye to my parents. I was going to miss them all great deal. I slowly walked up to them.

"Rosalina!" Lucy shouted as she ran up to hug me "I'm going to miss you very, very, very much!"

"I'm going to miss you too Lucy" she looked up at me sadly with her blue eyes "Do you really have to go?" "Yes" I sighed "Why?" she whined "Because my daddy has a new job in London" "But can't you stay here with us?" "I can't Lucy, sorry, as much I would love to" Lucy nodded and hugged me tighter and I saw Peter, Susan and Edmund walking up to us. "Hey Rose, how are you feeling?" Peter asked. I shrugged because, to be honest, I didn't know what I was feeling "Mostly sad"

"It's okay, you'll get used to London, meet new people, but don't you dare forget us" Peter said

"No need to worry about that" "Oh Rosalina! We're going to miss you so much. Your practically part of our family" Susan said, hugging me. The three other children nodded in agreement.

"I'm going to miss you guys so much!" I sobbed even more, touched by what Susan said. "Come on Rose, don't cry. It'll all be fine you'll see" Edmund said wrapping his arms around my shoulders. I nodded "I guess you're right"

"It's because I'm always right" he laughed

"Oh really?" Peter asked

"Yes"

"What about that time when-" Lucy, Susan and I started before he cut us off.

"Okay, okay so I'm not right all the time. But I'm right most of the- sometimes then" Ed was going to say 'most of the time' but then changed it when he saw the looks on our faces. Everyone, save Ed, then burst out laughing.

"Rosie! We're going to be leaving soon!" I heard my mother call. I suddenly went back to my sad state, tears welling up in my eyes once again. "Great" I said sarcastically. "Let's say goodbye to Mr and Mrs Williams" Susan suggested and she, Lucy and Peter started walking. I sighed, knowing there was no way out of moving, turning to see Edmund still standing there looking at the ground, eyebrows furrowing slightly.

"Ed, are you coming?"

"Huh? Oh, right. Yes" I started walking and saw my parents starting to get into the car "Wait Rose!" I turned and saw Edmund running up to me "I'm... giving this... to... you... so you can...remember me" he said as he was trying to catch his breath he also held up a necklace, it was a small diamond hanging off a piece of rope. "I know it isn't much but..." he shrugged. I hugged him tightly "Oh thank you Ed! It means a lot" "You're welcome" he mumbled. I checked in my pocket, remembering I had something in it, and pulled out a picture of me and him that was taken a few weeks before. I never knew we would be moving when it was taken, I was completely oblivious to what my parents were doing.

"I didn't get you anything but here-" I said as I handed him the picture "-to remember me"

"Thanks Rose. I'll never forget you" he said and we walked up to where my parents were.

"There you are Rosie, are you ready to go?" my father asked me. I nodded sullenly and he went and started the car.

I walked up to the Pevensies and said my last goodbyes.

"Goodbye Mr and Mrs Pevensie"

Mr Pevensie put a hand on my shoulder "We'll miss you Rose" Mrs Pevensie knelt down and hugged me "Goodbye Rose. I hope we see each other again. You be a good girl to your mother and father now, okay?" I nodded and hugged her back. Then I moved on to Peter, Susan and Lucy.

"Bye Pete, Bye Su"

"Goodbye Rose, we'll miss you" Peter ruffled my hair and Susan hugged me. I suddenly felt someone crushing my waist. I looked and saw it was Lucy "Don't worry Lu, I'm sure I'll see you again one day" I said even though it seemed like I was never going to see them again. When I finally pried Lucy off me, I went to Edmund who was standing further away.

"Goodbye Ed" I hugged him but he didn't hug me back and I could tell he was mad at me for leaving. I sighed "Anyway, thanks for the necklace. I'll miss you" and I walked away. I felt a hand on my wrist and suddenly Edmund was hugging me.

"I'm sorry Rose, thank you for the picture. I won't forget you" he said quietly.

"I won't forget you either"

After that, I slowly got into the car and started waving at them until I couldn't see them anymore. So I sat back down and hoped for the best.

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