A Change In Harry's Life
this is a revision of the first chapter.
Disclaimer: if I owned Harry Potter I would not be writing this Lovely Story.
A young Harry Potter (age 9) midst of being beaten, when a young man was walking by outside, the man heard loud sceams of a child.
The young man looked in through a window and saw a huge man beating a small child, he was scared for the kids life so he kicked down the door and ran in.
He grabbed the large man and pulled him off of the child, the child was crying so the man went to confort him, thats when the large man pulled a knife and tried to cut the younger man.
The young man having been trained in many fighting styles grabbed the knife and twisted it upwards into the large mans chest.
The body of the large man slid to the floor, the child looked horiffied at the blood but the young man grabbed him and went out the door, while saying "I will take you away from this abusive home".
A year later.
Harry has just finished thinking about what has happened in the past year, and is thankful that he was rescued. Harry has learned many things in the past year after being rescued by Jonathan, namely he is a wizard! and so was his adoptive father and his adoptive mother was a witch who was named Jessica they were bothe Purebloods and wanted him to be trained and prepared. so he has been studying hard for the past year and has read all hogwarts books from year one to seven, and is close to being a potions master because he is being taught by a family friend.
he is reading advance books and learning many spells, he has two wands one is made of elder with a core of griffin tears and unicorn horn powder, the other is of oak with a core of phoenix feather and basilisk fang they were bought in Knockturn Alley.
"Harry! where are you." Jessica said. "Im coming." yelled harry. "Hurry up or we will be late to the party." "Here I am, how are we getting there apparation or floo?" said harry. "We will be using the floo." said Jessica. "Do you have the Birthday gift?" "Yes mom." said harry" "come along now the floo address is Greengrass Manor."
GREENGRASS MANOR "Hey harry!" shouted Daphne. "Hey Daphne happy birthday here is your present." said harry. Daphne took the gift and placed it with the others on the table. The Floo flared green and three people tumbled out.
"Hello Mr. Malfoy and Mrs. Malfoy, hey Draco." said harry. "Hello harry how are you?" they all asked. "im good how are you." said harry
Time to open presents. said Mrss. Greengrass. 'From the Malfoys we have : A amazing light blue night gown. , from the Notts we have : a free coupon for a years supply of cauldron cakes !?. from the Salvones we have : a silver enchanted braclet that has a engravment that says Nothing lasts forever. but friendship lasts a lifetime. thats all the gifts.'
'harry and his family (AN: the Salvones if you didint know.) went through the floo to ther home.'
PLATFORN 9 3/4
'Harry looks on at the scarlet train its that time already, well bye Mom Dad see you soon. time to find a compartment.' said harry. 'in a car at the far back Harry is sitting with Daphne and Draco when the door is barged open and a redhead stumbles in.' 'hey mind if i sit here everywhere else is full.' said the readhead. 'I find that highly unlikley seeing as this is a magical train that can expand if more room is needed.' said Daphne. 'I agree.' said harry and draco. 'well i dont care what you slimy snakes think.' said the readhead as he left. 'I wonder what his problem is.' said harry. 'oh His family is the weasleys, there dirt poor and he is the youngest boy and likes to act like he has sway.' said Draco.
'Firs yers over here.' bommed a large man . 'no more than fer ter a boat.' he said. 'Hers ther firs yers proffessor.' 'thanks hagrid said the proffesor.'
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