Foreword

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I wrote this fanfiction based very loosely on the world of DotA. You don't have to know anything about DotA to enjoy this story, although if you do it'd provide a greater sense of amusement I suppose. The map is great anyway, if you haven't given it a shot then you should, but I digress. This is just a small section to ask you to review my work, I do plan on becoming a full-fledged novelist one day so I'd like to know what I might improve on. Do not slam this fanfiction because it may be inaccurate to the game of DotA and the Warcraft franchise; it is not supposed to be accurate to the current fictional world of Warcraft or DotA. On a side note: the names in the story are not mine, they are entirely the property of the creators' of DotA, who must themselves give credit to Blizzard. Enjoy!

The heroes mentioned so far, see if you can identify them in the story!

Sentinel

Prophet, Stealth Assassin, Alchemist Senior (An actual fat, short, green, goblin. Do not mistake him for the Alchemist you see in game), Alchemist Junior (Perhaps he might be the actual Alchemist in DotA), Slayer, Crystal Maiden, Moon Rider, Windrunner, Keeper of the Light, Dragon Knight, Drow Ranger, Slayer, Priestess of the Moon, Templar Assassin, Lord of Olympia, Juggernaught, Earthshaker, Faerie Dragon, Stone Giant, Admiral Proudmoore, Centaur Warchief, Bristleback, Sacred Warrior, Shadow Shaman, Troll Warlord.

Scourge

Night Stalker, Tormented Soul, Queen of Pain, Doom Bringer, Slithereen Guard, Pit Lord, Phantom Assassin, Lycanthrope, Necro'lic, Geomancer, Witchdoctor, Warlock, Axe, Bloodseeker.