This is my first Fanfiction so please review it and please tell me ways in with I can improve! Also im taking some OC's!


"The Beyblade world championship finalists are giving us an impressive show definitely!" Shouted the announcer through his microphone.

The large championship stadium shook under the strength of the 2 beys. The crowd shouted in excitement for their favorite blader, their cheers resonated like thunder.

"The 2 bladers, Masuta Orangee, and Zhu Pingo are truly amazing bladers." Said the announcer.

"Charge now Master anubus." Commanded Masuta.

His heavy attack type Beyblade swung with hard blows against the lighter stamina type bey.

"Damn at this rate I won't last much longer." thought Zhu. "Hold on for a little while longer Fury locker!" he shouted

Mako held his face so close to the TV screen as though not to miss a single second of this epic match.

"Mako I need you to do the dishes before I go out." Shouted his mother.

"But Moooooommmm I'm busy." Mako said back.

His mother stared him down, literally sending chills down his spine. He darted into the kitchen as his mother left for her night job. This the fastest he had ever done them before and there were always very little. He stared back at the third chair at the dinner table. That's were his father sat, he would always tell him stories about the adventures he had exploring the ancient temples and tombs of Greece.

"Finally finished." He thought.

When he dashed back to the TV, it was over. Another program about stocks and bonds or something was on and as a 14 year old boy, that wasn't his cup of tea.

"No way.." he said devastated. I didn't even get to see how it ended..."he whimpered.

Suddenly there was a knock at the door. At 8 at night, this alarmed Mako a bit. He grabbed his mothers baseball bat from under the couch and readied himself to swing. He looked through the peep hole and saw only a box and a very familiar black cowboy hat. He ripped the door open. He reached down and picked up the package and threw the hat on his head. With a big smile on his face. Attached to the package was a lone note. He slammed the door behind him and threw the package on the dinner room table and tore the cardboard apart. Inside was a red face bolt with the picture of a harp containing the sun, a red clear wheel a Sol metal wheel, a small spin track that he really can't identify and finally a red rubber performance tip.

On the note was written: To my dear son, Mako. I totally forgot your birthday and by the time you get this, it might be a few months. But we share a love for Beyblade and during my exploration i have finally collected the pieces of the Sol Lyrica from Greece. Its a wild horse and I don't have the time to break it in. So I thought why not give it to my son as a his present. I apologize, a bit under handed but I truly think you can master it. So HAPPY BIRTHDAY son I'll try to return A.S.A.P. Tell your mother I love her.

"Typical dad, your to lazy to do something yourself so you throw it on your family.." Mako thought.

As Mako put the bey together he felt glee. He held it against the light and it shone.

"How about a test launch" "3, 2, 1 LET IT RIP!" he shouted.

As he pulled the rip cord. The bey hit the tile cracking it, then launched at the TV getting trapped as it tried to rip through it. Mako's jaw hit the floor in astonishment. Not at the bey's power but at the thought of all the trouble he has just conjured up. Mako reached over and picked up his bey.

"Well Sol Lyrica I guess I'm stuck with you please but up with me." Said Mako.


SOL a mysterious beyblade from Greece, what will happen on Mako's adventure into the beyblade World. TO BE CONTINUED.