Gene Starwind vs. Mystery Man By magikfreak

Chapter 1: The mysterious man *Outside Starwind and Hawking*

One day Gene Starwind is walking out of Starwind and Hawking to have a smoke. A mysterious man walks up to him with a caster. The man had a black robe on with a hood covering his face. "Okay you sissy. I challenge you to a duel with only two weapons." said the mysterious man. "WHAT! Who the hell do you think you are?!" Gene screamed."All right but I hope you know who you are talking to. I am Gene Starwind. I'll take you on. How much money are we going for?" "900,000 yen" said the man. Gene's mouth practically dropped all the way to the ground. "How can I be sure that you have all this money?" said Gene suspiciously. "If you don't believe me then don't fight me." The man said. "Ok where at?" questioned Gene. "Blue Heaven in 2 days" the man said.

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Chapter 2: Explanatory

*Starwind and Hawking*

"Hi Gene." Said Asia, Sazuka, and Jim. "This one strange man came over and challenged me to a duel." Said Gene "What did this man look like?" asked Jim. "I don't know. The bastard had his face covered by a hood" said Gene. "I'm supposed to meet him at Blue Heaven in 2 days. "To the Outlaw Star!" said Jim.

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Chapter 3: The Fight

*Blue Heaven*

"Ok. I'm here. Now where's the bastard?" Gene said to himself. "Hey! Is that him over there?" said Jim. "Looks like the bastard decided to show up." Gene said. "If I were you."said the man. "I would stop calling me a bastard." "All right! Let's begin already!" said Gene. They both drew there casters. As Gene shot his #3 caster shell the mysterious man appeared behind Gene. Gene's shot missed. "You'll have to be a little faster than that." said the man. Gene shot his second shot. He missed again. "What the hell is up with this guy?" thought Gene. The mysterious man shot a #9 at Gene and hit him. Gene flew 20 feet back from the powerful blow. The man walked up to him and said: "Do you want me to kill you fast or would you like a painful death?" "Neither" said Gene. Gene whipped out his knife and cut off the mystery man's hand. Blood came squirting out. Then, Gene came around the mystery man's back and then slit his back right down the spinal cord. Blood came rushing out. At last Gene cut his head clear off. Gene looked like one big blood clot. "So where's my money bastard?" said Gene.

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