I don't know if this is very good or not. But I want people to tell me what they think. I was tired when I wrote this but I did try hard to make the poem flow. So please tell me what you think and if you don't like it I want creative criticism. K? Well read and for all of you who actually think I own Digimon… Sorry but I don't. If I did I would have put Matt in a lot more eps then he was in because he's my fav. Well anyways read on and Peace out.
(Mimi's POV)
Tired.
Exhausted.
I'm sick of all this.
I want to fall down on to the hard ground.
Every voice echoes.
Every light blares.
Every person has a double to spare.
My legs are very heavy.
My eyes sting.
I want to give up on this whole thing.
Resting my head, relaxing my eyes.
But I have to force my self to stay alive.
It's cold out hear.
And the snow soaks my cloths.
I was wrong the field was not the best way to go.
Why didn't I say sorry to Sora?
For fighting with her about such a dumb thing.
Why didn't I listen to my mom when she said
"It's to cold to where such a small thing."
But I was too stubborn.
I was too proud.
And now I'm through.
I fell to the ground.
I can feel it coming
I can feel me going
My heart is fading
My mind is closing
A wave of guilt
A wave of doubt
Topples me over and spits me out
There's no one here
No one near
Not for me
Not to see
Me parish in this field of snow
I go to get up but I can't move
I go to close my eyes but they won't move
Everything seems far
Every noise's muffled
And have you noticed how dark it is all of a sudden
My body's gone numb
My thoughts are all leaving
And here I lie on this hard cold ground
In my fears alone to all sound
One more minute
I know it is coming
Memories flood me
And some of them are funny
I see my family, my friends and everyone
Then I laugh
When someone makes a pun
I don't now why but then I cry
I wish I could cry while I'm die
Then it stops
And it's just black until a white light fills me
And then it's all done
Now can you R&R. I LOVE reviews. Specially ones that tell me people actually like my stuff and I didn't just waist my time. Now with that said… review. Arigoto
