This is my first Negima story so you will have to give me credit. This story is in different peoples points of view. The first and second chapter are in Asuna's POV. Please R&R and tell me watcha think.
Chapter one: The question that killed Asuna
Asuna, Konoka, Setsuna, and Negi were walking down the street heading towards a resturuant to eat at. It was spring break and they were enjoying the nice breeze that was forming
"So Asuna, today's the day that your going to tell Takamachi how you feel!" Konoka said with a grin on her face. "Do you know how long we have waited for this day to come?"
"Yah, we are really proud of you. We thought that this day was never going to come!" Negi said with a gaint smirk.
"Stop talking about it. I'm already nervous as it is." I muttered clutching my stomach.
"Well Asuna, now you know how I felt when everyone pressured me to tell Ojou-sama how I felt." Setsuna said looking at Konoka. They had been going out for two weeks now.
Everyone in class made a big deal out of it because they had been waiting so long for it to happen. They all followed Setsuna and Konoka to the World Tree. Everyone went in awww when it happened but they soon went from a quiet, peaceful, state to a lets throw them a party.
"That party was so much fun, wasn't it Sechan!"
"Yeah, everyone crashed on your floor and there was no room to walk."
"I missed my paper route that morning because I was so exhausted."
"Yeah you guys had fun while I got taken advantage over when I slept. When I woke up my hair was up, I had make-up on, and I was in a dress." Negi added.
"Sure got a laugh out of Kotora-kun before he had to leave." Kotora had a mission he had to do and wouldn't be able to see them all for a long time.
"So Asuna, what are you going to say when you tell Professor Takahata?" Negi asked.
"Wow, I never really thought of that. I guess I just will go with the flow and hope it doesn't come out all messed up and everything."
"You sure your not going to run when you see him?
"Jeez I hope not. If I do please restrain me. I have to do this."
"Wow Asuna, you sound so determined. You sure you want to eat first. I mean you don't want to throw up on him or anything." Konoka said right before laughing.
"I'll be fine. If I need to throw up I'll just have Negi beside me and miss Takahata and hit Negi."
"Ewww Asuna, I thought you had more class than that I mean..."
"I was just joking, jezz."
They were arriving at the resturuant when they all saw Takamachi and Shizuna sitting at one of the tables.
"I can't do this in front of Shizuna!"
"Of course you can. I did it in front of the whole class you can do it in front of Shizuna."
"This is totally different, I mean, you had no idea that they were there plus Shizuna and Professor Takahata have been going at it for months. Who knows what will happen!"
"Asuna you said yourself you had to do this so go!" They all pushed me ahead and as I turned around I saw Takamachi getting up and walking towards Shizuna.
"Could it be?" I thought to myself. "Is he actually?"
Takamachi pulled out a tiny black box, went on his knee and asked Shizuna one question.
"Will you marry me?"
My heart stopped. One moment felt like an eternity. "One day to late. One damn day to late!"
My eyes started to tear as I saw Shizuna jumping for joy and giving Takamachi a big hug repeating the words yes, yes, yes. "Why?"
I started running. No one stopped me knowing how much pain I was in. I kept running. Not knowing where I was going and wiping tears from my eyes whenever they got to blurry to see out of.
"Why was I so dumn to fall in love with a teacher? Why did I ever fell that if I told him how I felt then he might feel the same way?" Question after question haunted me as I ran.
The sky turned black, a thunderstorm was coming. The blackness reminded me of my heart. Black and Empty. The rain fell hard but my tears fell harder. I soon collapsed, slowly passing out in the middle of no where. I heard my name being called out in the distance. The sound faided because of the lightening and thunder.
A faided body stood over me as I fell into a deep sleep.
Thanks for reading. The next chapter is about Asuna and her depression. Please R&R and tell me what I can work on and if you liked it or not.
