Apologize me, but I have to ask one question, is that my Portuguese so bad? If it's I really want you to tell me, PLEASE.
That's the first chapter, sorry, but it's in English 'cause before I post in Portuguese I want to know if you understand my Portuguese.
The chapter 20 (about Seth) of AC will be posted tomorrow
Kisses, I love you all
Reviews
Blorry – Thanks sweet, you're such a cute
Leitora – I never said that the fault is from my mommy, please don't put words in my mouth, Thanks to the good luck, I really need, for the advices too, I will improve.
***HOSPITAL***
POV ALICE
I was arriving home from go shopping with my sis Rose, when I hear my mommy screaming like a crazy lady.
" Get back right now kiddo! With who you think you are speaking?" Do you wanna spanking? "I can resolve it...
Rose came to the house madly as a truck without driver. I followed her as fast as I could, because I was with millions of bags in my hands, but at this times she doesn't care, she just wanna save her baby,despite she don't assume.
EDWARD – I swear I didn't anything mommy, please…I promise I'll behave.
ESME – Hope you really do it son, 'cause you're hanging by a thread !
Mom left the place and Rose started doing millions questions for the "kid", I call him like this but I know I'm one too.
ROSALIE – What you did brat? Mom seems angry with you, obvious.
She laughed of her own joke, but I didn't, I just climbed the stairs and I began testing the clothes excited.
JASPER – AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAALICEEEEEEEEE
I shivered with the scream from my love. In last than one second I was in front of him waiting for an explanation.
ALICE – What? What happened Jasper? Why you was screaming?
I asked worried.
JASPER – Look in your visions of Daddy if he would discover if I go out
He said looking like a drunk and soon, fell back. I got chocked, of course I didn't saw any vision, I grabbed him before he fall in the ground. I touched him and for my death, he was hot. I ran madly to the stairs screaming for mommy's help.
ALLICE - MOM! PLEASE, I DON'T KNOW WHAT IS GOING ON WITH JAZZ, HE IS HOT .MOMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYY...
I was completely inconscient , see the reason of my life fallen in my feet and know that i couldn't do anything was making me feel a nothing.
It's Short, know, but isn't complete, I'm waiting for your thought.( PORTUGUESE & ENGLISH )
