Saihte

Prologue

Cluny and Slager ran and ran for their lives, still thinking they were being pursued by the two mouse warriors. They had never seen two single creatures so powerful that could defeat the rest of their horde. All that time they had been running through the woodlands, never looking back to see if they were being followed. Then they emerged from the woods and into the marshland. It was very grassy and open, and looked like it could go on for miles. That didn't stop them from running out into the open fields.

Then they banged right into something hard, and fell to the ground. They looked up to see a big, tough looking rat with a horde that stretched a long way with foxes, rats, ferrets, weasels, and stoats. Cluny looked at them and saw that they were acting like they were being held prisoner. Then the big rat looked at them both and spoke to them loudly.

"How dare you touch the mighty Saihte!" he roared.

Cluny and Slager had to cover their ears to avoid the loud noise.

"Now that you have looked upon the mighty and powerful Saihte, you will die!" Saihte yelled.

Cluny and Slager dropped to the ground and pleaded for Saihte to spare their lives, but Saihte started to pull out his dark sword when Cluny thought of an idea that would save their lives.

"My lord Saihte," Cluny bowed.

Saihte was a little flattered by being addressed as "lord."

"We have been defeated by some woodlanders, and we both have commanded mighty hordes. We have tried to take over Redwall, but we were defeated by two mouse warriors. One of them was just a normal mouse, and the other was glowing blue. He called them spirit powers," Cluny described.

Saihte suddenly gritted his teeth tightly at the thought of his good brother, Ethias. Suddenly he pulled out his dark sword, and grabbed the nearest vermin and slew him in two. Cluny and Slager crouched down into even more fear, and whimpered hoping to be spared by Saihte.

"So," Saihte said softly. "You know of my brother, Ethias?"

"Yes we do," Slager whimpered.

"Well that's good, or else I would have slayed you right here in front of my entire horde," Saihte smiled.

Cluny and Slager got up a little bit, but then were scared to death by what Saihte said next.

"I am going to make you two my honorary captains," Saihte said.

Saihte took out his sword, and dubbed Cluny and Slager captains. Just then, two of his own horde spoke out against him.

"But chief," one of them spoke out. "I thought we were your captains."

Then Saihte turned around and slew them both.

"Now I have two new captains," Saihte smiled evilly.

Cluny and Slager were starting to feel a little better, until Cluny remembered that he had mentioned the abbey. Saihte turned back to them and issued them to get up. They did as they were ordered.

"Now," Saihte yelled. "On to Reedwaaaalll!"

His horde made a mighty cheer with their weapons held high in the air. Then Saihte made the motion to start marching toward Redwall.

"This is going to be fun seeing you again my brother. Muahahahaha!"

Matthias: I remember that your first copy never had a prologue in it.

Ethias: Well, I couldn't find the old copy and I don't remember some of it.

Matthias: I'm starting to think about changing my answer.

Ethias: Too late Matthias. It's already been 3 days, even though I don't know why I put a date.

Matthias: I remember you had two copies.

Ethias: I gave the other one to my friend to read. She's a Redwall fan as well.

Matthias: Well you lost the other copy and now you need to remember what you wrote.

Ethias: Matthias, I know most of it. I lived it already. I gave the good copy to my friend, and the graded copy is at my hou- I mean hut.

Matthias: Just find it Ethias.

Ethias: I will find it. You just be lucky I still remember the first chapter by heart, and I'm going to add a little more stuff to it. The guy said the story and chapters were kind of rushed.

Matthias: Can we just send this prologue in so you can write the next chapter.

Ethias: Alright, I'll send it in, but someone said I should get it looked over a few times and see if I made any mistakes.

Matthias: May I go after them?

Ethias: No you can't he's right about what he said, and I'm going to follow that example, except for the one where he said read my other copy's version of my first story.

Matthias: Fine. We've been chatting for quite a while.

Ethias: I know we have. Goodbye Matthias.

Matthias: Goodbye Ethias.

1 day later

Ethias: Matthias! I got my first chapter looked over. The creatures said that I'm a good writer.

Matthias: That's great! Now post it right now.

Ethias: Good idea.