Tony: The first revamped chapter.

Millie: Please forget the very first revamp. Thank you.


A girl about twenty years of age stood on the edge of a dock in the harbor of Domino City. She held a semiautomatic handgun in each hand and one of the most sadistic smiles that you would ever see. But her eyes, are what told a different story. Her eyes held hurt, betrayal, and sadness.

This girl was named Millie. Millie Kill. She was an infamous international killer that has been on a killing spree for three years. But why? Why was she out killing innocent people? Did she kill for fun? Out of anger? Or sadness? Did she have an honest and justifiable reason for killing.

To those in society, no. They thought it was wrong how she killed others. They thought she didn't deserve to live life. They thought she should be locked away in a jail cell for the rest of her miserable life. After all, taking the lives of the innocent wasn't a justifiable reason, now was it?

But that's not what Millie thought. She thought she had a justifiable reason for what she did. She thought her reason was right, even if others thought it was wrong. This reason goes deep, very deep, into Millie's past. It is something that she wishes to never speak about. Never, ever in her life, would she speak about it again.

The police didn't know what to do. Behind Millie was a child. The child was a young boy with duo-colored brown hair, the top layer almost orange and the bottom a dark brown, and big, innocent, light brown eyes. He was holding on tightly to Millie's leg.

If the police began to shoot, they would undoubtedly kill the boy as well. They couldn't risk the boy's life. They had to outsmart Millie, and they had to do it before she did something terrible. But they were at a dead end. They didn't know what they could do.

"Take a step back, Jaden, dear," Millie said to the boy.

The young boy, Jaden, looked up at Millie with a questioning look in his eyes. He didn't understand why she wanted him to step back. He didn't want to make her mad at him so he hesitantly let go of her and took a step back as Millie began to put her guns down.

Millie placed her guns on the ground and turned to little Jaden. She picked him up into her arms and slowly began to walk toward the police force. Millie was tired. You could see it in her eyes. She was tired of running, of having to flee from place to place, only to end up back in her hometown. She was tired and wanted to stop.

"Jaden, you're going to stay with the nice police people, okay?" Millie said to Jaden.

"But…why mommy?" Jaden asked.

"Jaden, I've told you, don't question mommy. I don't know when we'll see each other again, but I'm sure it'll be someday. I promise, Jaden. Just always remember mommy." Millie looked down at Jaden who looked up and nodded.

"I promise, mommy." Jaden gave the cutest smile. He snuggled into Millie's arms.

"Alright! I'm giving up! I'll come quietly as long as you leave my son alone! He's done nothing wrong!" Millie was yelling at the police force who lowered their own weapons.

A few of the policemen ran over to Millie and cuffed her hands so that they stayed around Jaden who was gradually falling asleep. Millie got into the police car and was driven to downtown Domino where a court hearing was held immediately. Jaden was immediately taken.

Millie was given life in prison without bail. She was given jail cell 11. This is the cell she died in, after hanging herself. But she carved something into the wall before she died. It was a promise. And it read…

Whoever steps foot in this cell, the place of my death, shall die, in the most brutal of ways. The reason? You have mocked me, by stepping foot into this cell. I do this for my Jaden. Signed, Millie Kill.

People laughed at this last promise. They stepped into the cell, and mocked her repeatedly. They died, horrible deaths. Each one with a marking of some kind either on their bodies or near the site of death. The marking was of a number. The number 11.

Jaden never saw his mother again. And he had children. His youngest and only son was named Jaden Jr. Jaden Sr. died at when people thought that he'd want to get revenge for his mother. And only Jaden Jr. remained with his sisters and mothers. All of them mourn Jaden Sr.'s death.

The clock is ticking now. Jaden has a friend by the name of Jesse Andersen who doesn't believe in Millie Kill. He has stepped into the cell and has challenged Millie. But Jaden was there. He bears a striking resemblance to his father. Millie just might spare the life of this Jesse boy, all because of Jaden.

The life of this boy may be saved, all thanks to Jaden Jr.…


Tony: Kinda like the actual first chapter, eh?

Millie: Review...