I have no idea what happened to the last first chapter that I uploaded. I have edited this one and it turned into about 10k words. Everything is explained in the summary. If someone doesn't understand the story goes on in detail later on in the chapter

Kami's Disciples

Chapter 1

The Dimensional mind body transference

"normal speech"

'Normal thought'

'Kami/demon thoughts and mind conversations'

"Kami/Demon talking, justu and kido"

Naruto's bedroom

Naruto awakened from his peaceful slumber yawning as he rubbed the asleep from his eyes. Slowly he sat up in bed whilst rubbing the sleep from his eyes. Naruto looked around and noticed all of the ramen cups around the room. 'I normally throw all those away; what happened?'

Naruto scratched his head in confusion. Unfortunately he became further confused since he scratched cloth instead of hair, and he didn't remember putting on a nightcap on last night. Naruto then took the cap of his head and looked at the fish designed nightcap.

He continued to stare at the familiar looking object for a good minute trying to figure out where he has seen it before.

Naruto's eyes widened in realization and slight panic 'This is Naruto's head nightcap that look like it eats his head. How do I have it?' Naruto thought in bewilderment. Shaking his head clearing his thoughts. Naruto looked around the room. This time he looked closely at the walls and the objects around the room. Naruto glanced through the doors of the bedroom into the kitchen and noticed the dining room table that only had two chairs.

'Holy shit that looks exactly like Naruto's kitchen' Naruto thought, making him further his thoughts of him being crazy.

Naruto, thinking that his mind was acting up and showing him highly improbable images, shook his head. Naruto decided to see if he was really in Naruto's room by getting up, but as he did this he wobbled around slightly not accustomed to this body's stature, after stretching and walking around to help himself get better acquainted with his new body. He then proceeded to walk across the room, stopping in front of the closet door. Naruto took a deep breath preparing himself just in case he was not faced with the onslaught of orange jumpsuits he was expecting.

Naruto slid open the closet door, coming face to face with five 'Kill-Me-Orange' colored jumpsuits, he breathed a sigh of relief.

Then he suddenly realized that he is the only one in Naruto's apartment, so therefore he hypothesized that he was Naruto himself, but Naruto wasn't very sure so he then traveled to the other side of the room and entered the bathroom, eyes closed.

Naruto entered the bathroom and he felt around for the sink, he stared in the drain for a good minute 'Kami-sama I swear if this is some cruel joke...' He thought leaving the rest to the imagination.

Naruto slowly opened his eyes; looking in the mirror he was met with a mop of blond hair. Naruto rubbed his eyes just in case he was daydreaming. When he finally realized that he wasn't daydreaming he started jumping around in joy.

After about three minutes of jumping around Naruto finally settled down, confused on what to with his days, he searched his memories trying to find the most recent one.

The most recent memory was from last night, when he was so excited that he almost didn't go to sleep. Naruto's eyes snapped opened in realization, hurriedly he rushed to the closet and grabbed an orange jumpsuit, full of dread he put it on, realizing that if he wanted to be a stealthy shinobi he needed different clothes.

He then went to the cupboards and grabbed a cup of ramen for lunch. Naruto went around the apartment looking for his keys, finding them on his kitchen table he locked up and left.

As Naruto walked down the stairs realizing that he would be seeing Hinata very soon, he proceeded to the streets with barely contained excitement.

Immediately upon hitting the earthen walking path, Naruto was met with the hateful and angry glares of the civilians, and with some shinobi just ignoring his existance. Naruto narrowed his eyes in sadness. 'How can they not trust my father's fuinjutsu ability' Naruto pondered in disbelief.

Naruto arrived at the academy, slightly out of breath due to running all of this way. As Naruto took a shuddering breath he reached for the door.

'Remember try to act somewhat like Naruto, just don't screw up.' Naruto told himself as he walked through the door.

Naruto gaze took in his surroundings; he noticed that Sasuke was sitting next to the wall, and Hinata was also sitting in the same section but she was sitting next to the stairs. Deciding that he would be the only person to save Sasuke from his future ordeal of fan girls, he went to go sit by Sasuke, as he passed Hinata he threw out pleasantries "Ohayou Hinata-san" Naruto said with a bow of his head.

Hinata blushed a rosy red, "O-Ohayou N-N-Naruto-kun." Hinata stuttered out averting his gaze, and started staring at the floor suddenly finding it interesting, whilst poking her index fingers together. 'Did that really just happen?' Hinata wondered to herself.

Naruto walked the rest of the way to Sasuke, who was gazing off in the distance. Sasuke took notice of the person coming towards him "Uchiha" Naruto greeted as he took a seat. "Uzumaki" Sasuke responded with a nod.

Naruto took a deep breath trying to think up a conversation starter.

"So how goes it?" Naruto asked with a slight bit of worry.

Sasuke's eyes brightened at the question "Well yesterday my tou-san finally taught me a family justu." Naruto actually looked somewhat intrigued. "So how good are you at Goukakyuu no justu (Grand fireball technique)?" Sasuke glared at him "How do know that is the family jutsu?" Sasuke glared at him with a pointed look. "It's pretty much common knowledge throughout the village." Naruto said condescendingly, not intimidated at all.

Sasuke flushed in embarrassment. "Whatever, it's a clan matter anyway." Sasuke finished. Naruto quirked up an eyebrow "Oh really, it sounds like you're just trying to cover up the fact that you failed." He finished with a smirk.

Sasuke slammed his hands on the table, this got the attention of Hinata, whom glanced at them nervously, 'I hope they don't fight, that would give our new sensei a horrible first impression' Hinata wondered.

"I am doing perfectly fine for just learning the jutsu YESTERDAY!" Sasuke said glaring daggers at Naruto. Naruto crossed his arms expecting to get a rise out Sasuke for his next comment. "I've heard that Itachi mastered that jutsu in one day." He said

Sasuke clenched his fist in barely controlled rage "You think someone like you can beat an Uchiha?" He asked. Naruto jaws tightened at this question. "What! You think that you're better than me because I don't have a family to go home to?" he question in disgust. Sasuke seemed downtrodden "W-What you don't have a family?"

Naruto, shaking his head said "No I don't, they died the day I was born."

Sasuke looked in thought for few moments. He then nodded his head as if he was answering his own question. "You should come over after school and meet my family." He said eager to deepen this newly formed bond. Naruto shrugged "Sure" he decided to do something useful with his time so he went through ALL of his memories, from his other dimension's life, and the present Naruto's memories as well.

Wading through all of the memories a certain one stood out at him

Flashback no jutsu

A five year old Naruto was walking down a street towards bright lights that were in the center of the leaf village, the only mistake that he had done thus far was that today is the Kyuubi festival, but this festival was the celebration of the Kyuubi's 'demise'. The thing that Naruto didn't know was that these mentally challenged villagers thought that he, Naruto, was the kyuubi reborn in human form.

Unfortunately one of these villagers noticed Naruto, and he nudged the guy next to him. They both looked at the little boy with great malice in their eyes. The two villagers rallied about ten other villagers to chase Naruto. "Let's finish what the yondaime started" one village said.

Flashback end

Blinking in confusion due to the memory stopping abruptly Naruto pondered why the rest of the memory wasn't there 'Hopefully I outran the villagers, if not I must of repressed it' The door opened braking Naruto from his thoughts, curiosity getting the better of him Naruto took a look at whoever entered. He immediately recognized the pink hair Naruto groaned 'Sakura damn it! Let's hope she doesn't go fan girl immediately.' Naruto thought hopefully.

Sakura looked around at her fellow academy students. Sakura's eyes landed on Sasuke and her eyes flashed with hearts in them. Sakura decided to go and get Naruto out of his seat, but she proceeded with caution considering that her mother told her to keep her distance from Naruto. Sakura weighed the options and realized that sitting next to Sasuke was SO worth confronting Naruto.

"Um Naruto would you mind if I could sit there?" she gestured to the seat that Naruto was currently sitting in. "Really do you not see the other seats around here?" He said sardonically, gesturing around the room.

Sakura developed a tick mark on her head, "Move Naruto-baka so I can sit next to Sasuke-kun" She finished in a dreamy state, probably having some fantasy about her Sasuke-kun. Naruto's eyes narrowed dangerously at Sakura. "No go find somewhere else to sit," he commanded. Sakura sighed sadly and trudged on to do as Naruto suggested/commanded, not even noticing all the other people that showed up.

Naruto sighed in exasperation "Stupid fan girls," Sasuke nodded in agreement. Naruto then leaned back and got comfortable trying to devise a plan to stop the Uchiha massacre.

The teacher, Iruka, entered the classroom interrupting Naruto from his thoughts."Ohayo everyone" he looked around expecting people to say hi.

Iruka being the friendly person that he is; was getting slightly irked since the children didn't give him the respect he deserved as their teacher. Iruka calmed his breathing and decided to try again. "Hello class," This somehow got the classes' attention "Hello sensei!" Everybody exclaimed. Iruka smiled "My name is Iruka you all may call me Iruka-sensei from this day onward. Now we shall start with introductions." He pointed to the blonde known as Naruto. "You first" Naruto looked around confused; he pointed to himself "Me?" Iruka's eye twitched, he nodded. Naruto stood up and rubbed the back of his neck nervously. "Well my name is Uzumaki Naruto, and I am one of the last Uzumaki in this world." He smirked "It be in everybody's best interest to remember that name 'cause that's gonna be the name of fifth hokage, ya know." He finished brimming with confidence. Everyone but Hinata sweat dropped at Naruto proclamation. Hinata sat there having full faith that Naruto could accomplish his goal.

Everyone introduced themselves and said one of their goals. Iruka clapped his hands "Okay class, today we'll be starting at the very beginning, the battle between Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara battle at the Valley of End." Iruka explained.

Naruto relaxed in his chair he leaned back and stared at Hinata who was for some reason blushing whilst staring at the desk. 'Hinata you always look so cute when you're blushing' Naruto's eyes widen in realization.

'Wait Hinata is not even looking at me or even close proximity to me, so therefore she has to be a closet pervert. Yes that totally explains why she always faints, but she never had a nose bleed. Maybe she accidently read a Icha-Icha book when she was little. I've always been curious about those, hopefully she has one…' Iruka finally noticed Naruto not paying attention he was strangely staring at the Hyuuga, and oddly enough the Uchiha was looking at Naruto like he grew a second head. 'Naruto's not even paying attention Hokage-sama said he maybe some trouble.'

"Troublesome child" Iruka muttered under his breath. "Naruto" This drew all attention to Naruto. When Hinata met his stare, she blushed and tried to recede further into her jacket. Naruto was none the wiser, still thinking about Hinata, a blush spread across his cheeks. 'Damn kids these days, they're getting even more perverted every year.' He thought assuming the blushes across Naruto's cheeks were due to slightly lecherous thoughts."NARUTO!" Iruka yelled, making Naruto fall out of his chair. Everybody in the classroom laughed, even Hinata giggled "Kuso!" Naruto glared at Iruka. "What the hell Iruka-sensei that wasn't nice." Naruto rubbed his ass. "Damn that hurt."

Iruka pinched the bridge of nose "Are you really not paying attention on the first day of ninja academy?"

Naruto snorted and crossed his arms "Of course I'm paying attention" Sasuke snorted at the lie "Liar you were staring at Hinata." Sasuke mumbled.

Naruto's cheeks were slightly dusted with a light blush "S-Shut up teme." Naruto said clearly embarrassed. Iruka looked to sasuke for an answer. "What did you say Sasuke?"

Naruto jumped up and tried to clasp his hand over Sasuke mouth, but he didn't because Sasuke held Naruto back with a hand to the face. "Don't tell them, teme." Sasuke smirked "I said that he was staring at Hinata for the past five minutes." Iruka chuckled good heartedly. Naruto blushed a shade of red that would make Hinata proud, he then buried his head in his arms muttering something about a "stupid Uchiha" and ruining a relationship. Hinata on the other hand looked like a brick by the hue of her cheeks, she soon got lightheaded. Then she fainted. Hinata's head hit the desktop, and then she started to mumble something about Naruto that was too quiet to actually hear.

Lunch time

Naruto went outside with his new friend, Sasuke. Naruto thought he should try at least one kido considering that he now had chakra, and his prayers may have been answered.

Sasuke turned to Naruto with a question plaguing his mind "Naruto what did you bring for lunch?" Sasuke asked expecting an answer, he didn't get one. So Sasuke repeated the question. This time Naruto responded. "Hmm…did you say something?" He said in a kakashi like way. Sasuke shot Naruto an annoyed stare. "Well I asked you a question?" Naruto said as he raised an eyebrow. "What did you bring for lunch?" Naruto looked at Sasuke "Ramen of course, ya' know I'm never going to give you my ramen" He said while holding it protectively against himself. "I know, well I brought onigiri my kaa-chan made it" Sasuke said overly happy for some reason. "Okay" Naruto said nonchalantly, his mind focusing on other things. 'I think I'll start with a low level kido' Naruto thought with a spring in his step. He turned to Sasuke "Sasuke find someone to sit with I have something to do." He said getting an affirmative nod out of him.

Academy: Training Grounds

The academy training grounds are just like training ground seven except this training ground doesn't have the stream in the middle 'So let's see I think I'll do four' Naruto thought. Naruto closed his eyes and imagined the lightning attack in his mind 'Okay build up chakra, I'm not really sure how to use reishi yet.' He told himself.

Naruto focused his chakra into his right index finger "Hado #4

Byakurai," The pale lightning attack spread into a fan shape, not the lightning shape that it was supposed to be, it traveled across the clearing and cut fairly massive tree in half. "That was… TOTALLY AWSOME!" He yelled excitedly. He then took on a calculative expression trying to figure out what went wrong since he didn't get the required shape. As Naruto started to head back he heard someone beyond the tree line groaning in pain. Naruto quickly turned back around and ran to investigate.

Lunch area: Five minutes before.

Sasuke was looking around for someone to eat lunch with. 'You know what screw this.' He thought seemingly ticked that he only made one friend today. He wondered off to a giant oak tree and sat down underneath it. 'I wonder what Naruto had to go do…I think that he went to the training grounds.' Sasuke got up and let curiosity get the better of him.

Sasuke, still a distance from the training ground heard someone speaking, but he couldn't make out the words. He recognized the voice as Naruto's, giddy Sasuke ran to close the distance; glimpsed something in the distance, it was a pale line and it approaching very fast. Sasuke's eyes widened in slight fear, he leaped out of the way, but he got a scratch that was started bleeding. Sasuke yelled in agony. Footsteps were rapidly approaching Sasuke.

Naruto looked at Sasuke with worry. "Baka, I didn't think you'd be stupid enough to follow me!" he yelled stopping right next to him. He took notice of Sasuke's wound on his cheek, which was dripping blood down his face. Naruto reached over and brushed away the blood with his thumb, and wiped it off on his clothes. "We should be heading back, Sasuke." Naruto turned to the academy and started to walk back.

Three minutes later Lunch area

Naruto looked at Sasuke "I'm going to go eat with Hinata you can eat with us if you want." He stared back confused "Why?" He questioned. "Why not?" Naruto shot back with a smirk tugging at his lips, causing Sasuke to stare back with an annoyed glare.

Naruto smirked 'Even in another dimension people still get pissed off with that.' Sasuke crossed his arms in indignation, and shot Naruto a dirty look. "Whatever, Okay I'll go with you, but that's only if she agrees."

"She will...If she doesn't stutter to death" Instilled with confidence Naruto walked over the tree that Hinata was enjoying her lunch under.

Hinata grabbed an octopus shaped sausage with her chopsticks, but she dropped it when she noticed that Naruto was coming her way. 'What could he want, maybe he coming to talk to me' Eyes shining with hope Hinata looked up at Naruto, whom was right in front of her. "Hey hinata is it okay if I eat lunch with you?" Her eyes widen with tears of joy and slight shock 'No way did h-he really ask that?'

When Naruto didn't receive a response he looked down depressed "Okay I understand if you don't want to have lunch with me" He said stabbing at Hinata's heart strings.

"No! i-it's okay if y-you e-eat l-l-lunch with me N-Naruto-kun." She exclaimed slightly distraught at how she almost ruined his mood.

Naruto down at her on the ground, with a smirk crossing his features. 'Wow I'm surprised she didn't faint,' He pointed to Sasuke "Can he join to?" Hinata's face shown with a brilliant smile, and she nodded her head "Sure"

After school

"My Nii-san said that he would be here to pick me up today, but unfortunately he never said when," Naruto gave Sasuke a calculating look 'Man this nice version of sasuke is kind of different' Sasuke ran ahead eager to see his brother. Naruto walked forward slowly as realization finally dawned on Naruto that he was going to meet the soon to be Uchiha traitor in the flesh. He smirked at the thought, and started walking a little faster.

Naruto caught up to Sasuke a couple of moments later, reaching his destination Naruto looked around for Itachi.

Naruto spotted him walking casually towards him; in spite of how ragged he looked. Naruto nudged Sasuke, who was staring off into space, and pointed to Itachi. Sasuke's eyes lighted up with joy upon seeing his brother.

Sasuke kind of ran towards Itachi, excited to see him. Itachi cracked a slight smile upon seeing Sasuke run towards him. "Hi nii-san!" sasuke said excitedly. "Hi sasuke-kun, how was your day?" He said with a hint of emotion. Sasuke grinned "I made a friend today he saved me from a fangirl"

At 'Fangirls' itachi visibly flinched "Really who?" He asked with his eyebrows raised. "Naruto and can he come over to our house" Naruto raised his head and started to pay more attention.

Itachi nodded "Sure, kaa-san and tou-san would probably love to meet your new friend." Naruto looked at Itachi with surprise and shock gracing his features. He quickly got over his shock, and smirked 'Well he is a genius, if he doesn't know the difference between the kunai and the scroll its sealed in, then he's not really a genius.' He realized.

Itachi then looked at Naruto with a knowing smirk. "Okay sasuke-kun, naruto-kun let's go." Itachi said turning around. "Okay nii-san" He turns and looks at Naruto. "Come on Naruto!"

5 minutes later

As Naruto and company were walking to the Uchiha estate Itachi looked at Naruto with a somewhat curious stare and asked "So Naruto-kun why did you save Sasuke-kun from a fangirl?"

"I helped him because I really hate fangirls, and I also realized that he got all of this attention because of all of those girls are superficial. It's also great that people see me as the village pariah thanks to that they will underestimate me, giving me one of the shinobi's best weapon; deception," Naruto said looking at the road ahead.

Itachi gazed at Naruto with something akin to understanding . 'To be so strong at a young age, one must go through many hardships.' He thought fondly remembering his hardships of the past in clear details.

Itachi wondered if facing all of these hardships made him a better shinobi. "Naruto-kun would you mind if I tested your abilities?" Itachi asked.

'Why would he want to test me? As far as I know Itachi never had anything to do with me' He wondered to himself.

Naruto shrugged "Sure why not?" Naruto looked at Itachi "So when are we going to do this?" He asked with a raised eyebrow "When would you prefer Naruto-kun?" Naruto scrunched his eyebrows up in thought "I guess after dinner would be good."

10 minutes later Uchiha estate

With the main Uchiha estate coming Sasuke rushed to the door with Itachi trailing right after leaving Naruto with his thoughts 'Wait Naruto doesn't know any anything about the way of the shinobi, I guess I have to do kido, and hope that it is easy to understand.'

Breaking out of his stupor Naruto rushed forward and entered into the Uchiha estate, noticing Sasuke and Itachi in the process of taking their shoes off in the genkan. As Naruto started taking off his shoes, Sasuke excitedly ran into the kitchen and yelled up the stairs. "Kaa-san I'm home and I brought a friend over, nii-san said it was okay!" Sasuke exclaimed as Naruto came into the kitchen. A sound was heard coming from upstairs, which sounded vaguely like words, as Mikoto came down the stairs she repeated herself "Wow Sasuke-kun you actually made a friend, who..." She stopped dead sentence, as she took her last step off of the stairs. "Oh is this him?" She inquired, surprisingly without any malice.

Sasuke nodded "Hai Kaa-san this is my friend Uzumaki Naruto who saved me from fangirls all day." Sasuke said with a huge grin "Really?" She asks genuinely surprised. Sasuke nodded with a smile.

With her head in a slight bow, she said "Well anyway I'm Mikoto,

Uchiha Mikoto, Sasuke-kun's mother." With a bow Naruto said "It's a pleasure to meet you Uchiha-sama."

'This boy sure is polite for not having anyone teach it to him'.

Mikoto thought sadly "So kaa-san what's for dinner?" Sasuke asked. "Food" She said smirking

Naruto snickered "You walked into that one." Sasuke blushed with embarrassment, and turned to Naruto "Whatever, what do you want to do Naruto?" Sasuke asked "We could spar or train?"

"Is that really all you think about?" Sasuke asked with a

sweatdrop. Naruto nodded "Yeah, among other things. Is there something wrong with that?" He questioned with crossed arms.

Sasuke sweatdropped again "No come on we're going to the Uchiha training grounds." Sasuke somewhat ordered "Okay"

Naruto looked up at the elder male uchiha "Ne, Itachi-san do you want to come as well?"

He nod in the affirmative "Sure Naruto-kun."

Uchiha Training ground

As Naruto went through the giant doors that led to the training ground he looked at the older Uchiha incredulously. "How do you guys not get lost here?" The young blond asked. They both shrugged and looked at one another. "Don't know, we just never have." They both say in unison

Naruto's posture straightens and he takes on serious expression, he glances at the Uchiha brothers "Okay for are we going to use our sharingan?" Naruto said, eyes sparkling with genuine curiosity. Itachi looked at Naruto confused "Our sharingan, but you aren't from the Uchiha clan."

Naruto turned to them and looked at them with a dead serious look. "You're right I don't have one, I have three that I know of." He said, the last being in thought. Their eyes widened in surprise and disbelief "W-what y-you sound serious" Itachi said somewhat disbelieving "Yes I am, one of them is the Rinnegan, one of them you are fond of, and the other one is from around here." Naruto answered vaguely.

Sasuke had a confused look still wondering what the Rinnegan was so he was not aware of the rest. Itachi's eyes widened farther in disbelief. "W-what how is that possible?" He stuttered out. Naruto crossed his arms and a sighed sadly "I wished to come to this dimension with the ability to use all Kekkei Genkais, and more abilities to bring peace to this world, but in order for that to happen I need to train those abilities" He said in an informative tone. Itachi was the first to get out of his shock a minute later "If that's true then show us your Sharingan." He said with his eyes narrowed.

With a shrug Naruto said "Okay whatever." Naruto closed his eyes and channeled chakra to them. "I don't know how many tomoe I have."

"Okay" said Itachi. Naruto opened his eyes to show the cursed Sharingan of the Uchiha clan. Naruto looked at Itachi expectantly "Well how many?" Itachi took a step back "You have three tomoe in each eye." Itachi said amazement seeping through his voice.

Naruto smirked at Itachi "Well Itachi-san want to start that match now?" "Sure why not Naruto-kun." Then he started rushing towards Naruto, but Naruto raised his in a halting gesture, making Itachi stop in his tracks. "Wait a minute I have to do something first." Itachi nodded his head in compliance. 'So how do I do I call upon one of the zanpoktou.' Naruto pondered

There was a deep chuckle in Naruto's mind. 'I see child, I figured that as soon as you got there that you'd try to change things and for the better, so far you have.' A powerful voice said in the blonde

'Are you the Kyuubi, if so then I'm not your child, and how do you know I'm not from this dimension?!" He asked the voice in his head.'I know because I granted your wish.' The voice said with amusement.

'W-what? How? The only way I can think of is i-if...' Naruto's eyes widen in realization as he appears in a mindscape it's different from the sewer mindscape for the Kyuubi. After waiting for his eyes to adjust to the light. He then noticed a traditional Japanese two story house that faded into view and its very simple but slightly shallow stream that starts from the tree line about 5 meters to Naruto's right, and goes in front of the house continuing to the left of the house for 10 meters, and ended in koi pond. In front of the house there was stepping stones in the stream that led to the house. Around the clearing there are all kind of trees ranging from 5 meters to 90 meters tall. Then Naruto seen the man walking towards him. The person in question had blonde hair, a heart shaped face, lightly tanned skin, with blue eyes shining with unfathomable wisdom, wearing a midnight blue kimono with Sakura trees on it with the kanji for love '愛' and hope '希望'.

Naruto realized that he was a couple of feet from him "Hello my child, and to answer your question; yes I'm the one your world prays to, the one you call kami-sama." He said with a smile.

Naruto's eyes widened and took an unconscious step back. In a hushed and disbelieving tone Naruto asked. "Seriously?" Kami-sama nodded in the affirmative. Naruto looked down in utter disbelief at this revelation "B-b-but w-why m-me?" He stuttered out in his shocked state.

A knowing smile graced Kami-sama face "Because my child I know the true reason why you wanted to come here." Naruto took a step back in shock "NO!H-h-how I never told anybody?!" Naruto almost whispered at the end. Kami-sama walked over and placed a hand on Naruto's shoulder and looks at him with understanding and empathy. "I only know because you started asking yourself out loud at 13 'why did I fall in love with her' and you always asked why it hurt."

Naruto looked down with teary eyes "Yeah t-that's the way I remember it, but no matter what I always held hope that I would be with her." Naruto said with smile filled with pain and sorrow.

He lifted Naruto's chin up and Kami-sama had a somewhat proud smile on his face. "Love that transcends time, space, and a whole other dimension. That's the reason I brought you here." Kami-sama said removing his hand from Naruto's shoulder. Naruto laughed "I'm here because Kami-sama's a romantic." This earns a laugh from him. "Yes" Kami simply said.

"When you defeat this world's evil I will grant only you immortality" Kami-sama said with a serious but smiling face. With absolute conviction Naruto said "No if she's not with me here then life's not worth living without someone to share it with." He smiled somehow grew even more. "You do realize you just said no to kami-sama?" Naruto rubbed the back of his neck in embarrassment.

"Um...sorry." Naruto said nervously. Kami-sama chuckled "It's okay and you pass. Now on to your question all you do is clasp your hands together and say 'come fourth and fight with me' and say the name of the zanpoktou you want. Then pull your hands apart" Kami-sama explained

Naruto nodded, and looked around "Okay, now how do I get out of here?" He asked bewildered. Kami-sama just waved his hand and Naruto disappeared from his mindscape.

'Starting tomorrow I will start training you to be the Juubi's equivalent in battle.' Kami-sama thought with a calculative expression. His eyes glazed over, as he was seeing the different paths that the future may hold "He will be a wonderful disciple of mine." He said with a grin.

Outside world

In the training area Itachi looking at naruto whom was zoned out with his eyes glazed over. Itachi looked at Sasuke "Naruto has been like that for ten minutes." Sasuke stopped looking at the sky, then he looked at Naruto. Sasuke just shrugged, and returned to looking at the sky.

Itachi was deep in thought about Naruto 'Is he talking with the kyuubi? I wonder if he even..' Naruto was then covered by white light breaking his thoughts. Itachi looked at him trying to understand the situation at hand. Itachi's eyes widened as Naruto's nine year old body grew to 5'1 "W-what just happened." Itachi stammered out. "Hey I'm back" Naruto said with a fox like grin. Itachi's brows raised in confusion "What just happened, you were not here for like ten minutes. Then you were suddenly enshrouded in white light, and grew like a foot?"

Naruto raised a brow "Really? Didn't know anything happened outside of my mind." Naruto just shrugged and clasped his hands together and said "Come fourth and fight with me hyourinmaru," He said while he pulled his hands apart the unsheathed sword of hyourinmaru started to materialize from the middle of the blade due to white particles going to the blade that added more solid mass to the blade with each particle, finally the materialization of hyourinmaru was complete as white particles stopped. Which revealed the whole sword, but the tsuba (guard) of the sword was pure black. The sword stayed suspended in the air until Naruto took the sword by the tsuka (whole handle). Naruto took a standard katana stance; sword in front, handle to the left side of his body with the blade crossing to his ride side of his body.

Itachi looked utterly amazed and curious at the same "H-how is that possible? Is that due to the powers of the Rinnegan?" He asked.

Naruto grinned "No it was part of wish that was granted by kami-sama, this is one of many zanpaktou that I can materialize here." Naruto explained.

Somehow Itachi looked even more confused. "What you mean y-you met kami-sama? What is a zanpaktou!" He activated his Sharingan 'How his chakra capacity has doubled…maybe.'

Naruto decided to enlighten Itachi. "The power that you just witnessed was one of the many gifts granted to me by Kami-sama to bring peace to this war torn world."

Itachi smiled a true smile that spoke of wisdom and pain beyond the mere age of thirteen. "Hopefully one day that you will purge the evil of this world, and if you so wish, I will help you accomplish that goal" He finished with determination shining in his coal black orbs.

Naruto smiled a wistful smile one that spoke of the hardships to come, while his eyes burned with determination. "It won't be easy but with a genius such as yourself, it should be a fairly realistic goal. Especially if you train to protect your precious people and the next generation."

Itachi smiled proudly "Couldn't of said it better myself." Itachi started to stretch. After a few moments he said "First move goes to you Naruto-kun"

Naruto nodded and did a few test swings with hyourinmaru staring at the blade in wonder. Stopping he pointed the tip of the sword at him and started to build up chakra in his hand and started to put the technique into the sword. "Hado #4 byakurai" Itachi simply side stepped the bolt of lightning and rushed forward as he unsheathed his anbu issued tanto. Itachi channeled chakra to his blade making the blade glow a light blue. He attempted to cut Naruto with a diagonal slash across the chest. But Naruto blocked and started the lethal dance known as swordplay. Naruto managed to get just little cuts here and there. Itachi kneed Naruto in the gut him spewing saliva and a little bit of blood. Not having the required reaction time; Naruto took a chakra packed kick in the face that sent him tumbling for a few meters. Naruto stood up and wiped the blood that drippled down his mouth, and spit out the remaining on the ground. He looked at Itachi with a smile in his face "Lets kick this up a notch." He finished with a smirk on his face.

Itachi smirked at the young blonde and murmured 'interesting' under his breath. "Ok, lets try ninjustu." Naruto glared at Itachi intent on trying to add a justu to his nonexistent repertoire he copied the chakra usage as he already knew the hand-seals from learning them in the other dimension. A couple of moments later they ended on the tiger hand-seal and both cupped their index finger and thumb to make a circle, and in unison shouted "Katon: Goukyakyuu no Justu!" the perfect roughly three meter wide fireballs collided in a fiery explosion canceling each justu out.

Naruto smirked "It's my turn now. Sit upon the frosted heavens hyourinmaru." Suddenly a blue Chinese dragon emerged from the sword and started to fly toward Itachi. Itachi jumped over the impending dragon, watching as the dragon passed harmlessly underneath him. The ice dragon crashed into the trees on the rim of the training ground, this shocked Itachi immensely

Naruto started to build up chakra to a remarkable level. He then spiritually tapped into the other entity in hyourinmaru. "Itachi-san that was called shikai a low release of a zanpaktou. What I release next is called bankai." Itachi looked confused at the simple information. "What's a bankai?" Itachi asked with a raise brow.

"I'll tell you later, and keep in mind that this isn't my stongest zanpaktou." After reaching the other being in the sword he released chakra "Now bankai Daiguren Hyourinmaru." White light took over Naruto's form as deep blue wings made of ice grew from his back stopping at 15 foot (4.5 meter) wing span sprouted from his back. He grew an ice tail that grew – that was nearly as long as his wing span – from his lower back. An ice dragon encased his hand within its mouth ice traveled up his arm and created a spiky shoulder guard. Upon forming completely the eyes of the dragon opened, showing a black eyes. Naruto's wings flapped and he raised to the sky. Naruto stared at his opponent noticing the slight fear, and an abundance of curiosity in his eyes. "O-okay that's good for now Naruto-kun" He shockingly said. Naruto nodded at the abrupt ending to the sparring match. Itachi put his tanto away and turned towards the compound. Mikoto came out as they we going inside and told them "Dinner's ready"

5 minutes later

"So Itachi-kun how was the spar with Naruto-kun." He snickers then

Mikoto snaps her head to him "D-did you just?" she asked. "Hai, he is above immensely strong for a nine year old, but he didn't use his strongest zanpaktou, and he just used his Sharingan, and he copied a justu perfectly if I may add, he also grew a foot"

Mikoto eyes widen in surprise. 'A zan-what? Did he say Sharingan? Did he grow a little bit?' Mikoto thought thoroughly confused at the recent information, she voiced her confusion hopefully to receive answers. "What is a zanpaktou? And how the hell does he have the sharingan?" She looked at both expectantly. Naruto took a step towards Mikoto. He cleared his throat, and in an informative tone decided to teach the class – which is quite amusing considering he is nine, even if said nine year old is 5'1 –"A zanpaktou is a sword that has a spirit in its base form, and there are stronger versions of this spirit. The more reishi or spiritual pressure there is determines the strength of the zanpaktou as well as the soul in which the spirt resides – here this is known as the spiritual half of chakra – which a person ultimately determines the power of the spirit at any given time." Naruto took a breather after the long winded short lecture. Everybody seemed to be taking in the information well.

Mikoto tilted her head in confusion "So your swords are living beings?"

Naruto nodded "They are for all intents purposes, but they are technically not alive until they are breathing."

Itachi looked at the others at the missing piece of information. "Um Naruto-kun are you going to talk about how you can make them materialize out of thin air, as well as you having the Sharingan, and growing taller?" Itachi questioned. Naruto looked at Itachi and then to Mikoto, whom looked serious. She got an evil glint in her eyes "Yes, Naruto-kun we need to talk about how you obtained something that I know for a fact that neither of your parents had." Naruto sweated nervously at the indirect accusation of him stealing the Sharingan. "Yes, the answer is Kami-sama." Naruto answered with the utmost seriousness. Mikoto gazed at Naruto with disbelief and a little bit of fear. She started chuckling that turned into full blown laughter. In between the bout of laughing she said "You...really...expect...me...to...believe...that?!"

All of a sudden a figure appeared in front the Uchiha family plus one Uzumaki. Kami-sama appeared same clothes that he wore in Naruto's mindscape. Everybody was extremely shocked that somebody showed up in the middle of trained killers. Kami-sama started chuckling "Hai, I did but that was part of my many gifts to him." He said wearing a charming smile.

"How did you do that? And how did Naruto acquire the Sharingan?" Mikoto asked curiosity eating away at her.

Kami-sama smirked taking the simple joy of people not knowing just who he was. Naruto grinned at the emotion almost flooding the room, yet only he was able to feel it. 'Here it comes' The sudden influx of emotion was gone in an instant, as Kami-sama looked at Mikoto emotionless. "Child I can do anything that I wish as I am Kami-sama" Everybody's sans Naruto eyes widen in shock. Then everyone but Itachi and Naruto laughs, after a good minute Mikoto said "Talk about a god complex." Mikoto uttered. Kami looked at her "I hope that this little factoid will quell your inquiry: I know about the Coup."

Everybody flinched as if they were physically harmed. "W-what? How? Who told you?!" Mikoto asked in disbelieve. "No nobody told me I already knew. It was one of the destinies that I had set for them if they got too arrogant." He finished with a superior air about him, which he is entitled to as he rules over all living beings. Visions of future paths flashed before his eyes showing the almost infinite outcomes that would occur if he were to divulge the information that he was pondering to the outside world. He smiled a genuine smile and decide to prove that he was in fact Kami-sama. "I know the person whom you loved before you placed with and settled for Fugaku" A second later comprehension crossed her face and her eyes widened in realization. She stepped back in shock whilst remembering the one that she loved, whom died on the day of the Kyuubi attack. Mikoto regained her composer "H-how I never even told her? So how can you know?" Mikoto said in disbelieve.

Naruto pinched the bridge of his nose in annoyance, at how much more complicated and different this version of the Naruto universe was compared to the one that he knew. 'Great the story is already diverging from the original story so much, future events may not hold true.' Naruto internally sighed. Only finding one word to explain this predicament 'Troublesome'

Kami-sama smirked in amusement "My child I've already told you." Naruto looked at Kami-sama eyes burning with curiosity. "Who was it?" Naruto questioned. "She was and still is in love with your mother naruto-kun." Kami says dropping the bombshell.

Naruto's mouth dropped open in shock "Well I wasn't expecting that outcome." 'mmmmm...well this is different, who knew Mikoto had a thing for Kushina?' He question himself looked at Itachi has noticed that his eyes were widened in surprise, but he quickly hides it then he says "That was unexpected, I didn't know Mother was a homosexual." Itachi said feigning disgust.

Mikoto sunk to her knees, clenching her heart in pain. Naruto sighed at the ignorance and taught hatred that he thought Itachi possessed. He turned to Itachi and said "Itachi-san just to do that to your mother just because she loves a women. Where did that unfounded hatred come from?" Naruto crossed his arms over his chest, and if one looked closely enough you could see the pain flash through his eyes before shining brightly with wisdom gained through a life that no one should be forced to live through. "A word of advice, love isn't something that you can control, it just happens. Even if you don't want to fall in love because of the consequences that society would try to force on you for falling in love with a person of the same gender or sex." Naruto eyes glazed over at a memory. He smiled wistfully.

"Not that I personally have fell in love of someone of the same gender or sex, but I know the feeling of not being with the one that you want." Naruto looked at Mikoto whose eyes were transfixed at Naruto waiting on his words. Naruto glared back at Itachi "You don't know what it feels like to love somebody even more than yourself, wishing every day to be with them, to hold them and whisper sweet nothings to one another. To be the shoulder that they cry on. You want to be there for them though everything, thick and thin. Yet even if they're not with you, you have the the hope that one day that you will be there with them." Kami-sama gave Naruto a look full of pride.

A very Uchiha-like smirk crossed Itachi's features, and he directed it at Naruto. "Very wise words from one so young Naruto-kun." Mikoto looked at Itachi hopeful that he didn't hate her. Naruto looked utterly confused at that statement. "Why do you say that Itachi-san?" "It was all to test you naruto-kun." Naruto gave him a deadpan look "Really Itachi-san?" Itachi nodded his head "Hai, I'm serious Naruto-kun." Itachi said.

Naruto looked at Kami-sama hopefully and asked a silent question. He then smiled and nodded, somehow understanding. Naruto just chalked it up to being Kami-sama. Naruto glanced to everybody, whilst rubbing his arm causing an uncomfortable air aura to be exuded from his body causing others to be uncomfortable. "Soo..what do we do now?" He asked bored bouncing on the balls of his feet. Itachi spoke up "I think everybody's hungry, yes?" he asked glancing at everybody. Everybody sans Itachi all nodded positivly "Yeah" Everybody said in unison. They all laughed with the exception of and everybody left with the exception of Naruto and Mikoto. Naruto snorted in derision at the lack of empathy from the other Uchihas. Naruto walked towards Mikoto and crouched down to her still slumped form, and lifted her chin to look her in the eyes. Upon making eye contact he gave her an understanding smile."Mikoto-chan I'm sure that my Kaa-san would have fallen in romantic love if you told her before she fell for tou-san." Naruto chuckled at the Kushina he knew in his mind. "Knowing her she would be in shock about someone actually loving her romantically, then she'd ask why. After you would tell her she would most likely glomp you then say 'I could learn to love you that way dattebane', then the two of you would be together." Naruto sighed and threw his hands up. "But alas you'll never know until I bring her back." This causes her to stand up with a slightly angered expression, but you can never tell with some uchiha. "HOW DARE YOU FUCKING LIE TO ME SAYING THAT SHE'LL COME BACK!" Naruto looked surprised at the anger that the Uchiha mother possessed.

Mikoto started sobbing, her voice becoming slightly somber yet still carrying the same anger. "I can't even tell her how I feel not now, not ever, you can't even fathom the pain that I have held in my heart since she died." Naruto crossed his arms and gave her a deadpan expression "Really were you not listening to me before?" This sobered her up. "Y-yeah I was. But there was something missing though, wasn't there?" She looks down and clutches her heart, as it was causing tremors of pain that she hasn't felt since her younger years. "It still doesn't compare with the pain I felt and still feel today."

I nodded "Just to let you know all pain is comparable no matter the pain, and the usually the only way one can tell how much pain a person has had in their life is based upon there wisdom and how much they want to help others." Mikoto gave him a questionable gaze "If that is true then the amount of pain that you felt was in the extremes." With a melancholic smile Naruto nodded. "Yeah and I vowed to never let somebody to live threw that pain alone." He said

He quickly changed the subject "Continuing to my story, I left out the more personal parts." Her eyebrows quirked up "Like what?" She asked genuinely curious. "Okay I don't mind telling the first person ever." "Really?" She asked disbelieving "Yeah people would have made fun of me, but there was a friend that wouldn't make fun of me." Smiling as he remembered his best friend that helped him through the rough patches of his life. "So what happened?" She asked so eloquently. Naruto took a deep breath. "In the dimension where I'm from we have these awesome animated TV shows called anime. A certain person from my world made the anime called 'NARUTO.' Which focused around a character named Uzumaki Naruto. Ever since I was ten I started watching this show almost religiously. Then fortunately or unfortunately depending on whom you ask, I fell in love with one of the female characters. Then when I thought it was love I wasn't really sure since I never felt that why to anyone or someone to me, when I was about thirteen I started praying to every deity that I could think of that I would be in Naruto's body when I woke up, with the ability to do everything from two of my favorite anime." Naruto tried to blink away the oncoming wave of tears. His efforts proved fruitless as they streamed freely down his face. "Eventually it started to hurt my heart so much that my whole body or soul hurt every second, sometimes it was both. Most of my free time I would think about her all the time, wondering how was she doing. Then after about three months of this I had to find out why the hole in my heart kept escalating in pain. I had a hunch that it was love but I hoped I was wrong. So I asked a couple of my trusted adults in my life, and they told me it was pure love – a very rare thing in my world. My fears were realized: I had fell in love with a fictional character." Naruto shuddered out a sigh "For about a year give or take three months I prayed to every deity from almost all religions to be in this universe. This went on for about two years. I then stopped at fifteen. I figured that since mortals didn't find any interest in me then why would immortals. I still always held hope that it would happen even if I was with her when I died." Naruto said with a melancholic smile.

She looked at Naruto smiling sadly as well. "Your right, you did have it worse than me." Naruto nodded his head. "It's bad fall in love with someone whom you can't talk to, do or say something funny to hear their melodiously divine laugher and their smile, or just to be there for them as a their best friend." Naruto wiped his tears on his sleeve, and brush Mikoto's away with his sleeve as well. After finishing he lifted Mikoto to a standing position and headed to the kitchen "Well let's go get something to eat." She nodded her head agreeing with him.

Kitchen

"What are they doing? I'm hungry!" Sasuke inquired/wined. Itachi looked at the annoyance in the room "Quiet Sasuke. They should be finishing up." Itachi's trained anbu ears was listening to the confersation in the other room 'That kid counseling an adult when he is so young …maybe he will be the guiding light to a brighter future.' He sensed them coming "Not to worry Sasuke-kun. Here they are." Sasuke looked towards the entry-way of the kitchen and noticed Naruto and Mikoto coming. Sasuke threw his arms up and shouted "Finally!" Naruto rubbed his neck with a sheepish expression. "Sorry to keep you waiting."

2 minutes later

Everybody was seated at the table ready to eat the Katsu Kare (Curry rice) with Tonkatsu (Fried Pork Cutlets) that Mikoto had made. The family raised their hand in front of their faces "Itadakimasu!" The meal was surprisingly ate in silence that is until Kami-sama spoke up

"Itachi, Mikoto I want you to help train Sasuke and Naruto with me." They bowed their heads in respect "It would be our honor." Itachi said.

After dinner

Mikoto gathered the dishes and took them into the kitchen. Naruto stood up and straightened his clothes "Mikoto-kaa-chan may I help?" The rest of the Uchiha family and Kami-sama's heads went up in surprise. Not believing the words that came out of Naruto's mouth. They decided to watch the scene play out. Mikoto turned away from the sink, peering at Naruto with a teasing glint in her eyes. "Kaa-Chan mm?" Naruto chuckled nervously. "Uh yeah in a sense you're kind of like my step mom." He said seriously. Mikoto's eyes watered up and she jumped at Naruto and hugged him and trapped his face in between her D cup breasts. She started to rub her face on top of his head "Ahh that's so sweet!" Due to the lack of oxygen Naruto's face started to turn blue. "C-c-can't b-b-bre-ath." She blushed and jumped back in embarrassment "hehe…Gomen." Naruto blushed as well "y-yeah it's okay." He rubbed his neck in embarrassment.

Sasuke looked confused at the topic at hand "So Naruto is my nii-san as well?" Sasuke inquired. Itachi's eyebrows shot up "Sasuke-kun that's not even poss-" Naruto interrupted with a raise of his hand. He cupped his right hand underneath his chin in thought. "Theoretically it's possible. All you have to do is take the genes from one parent, and have them fertilize the egg. This would have to be a somewhat synthetic fertilization, as it involves two females. Or you could change the construct of female fertilization so it could be carried out by copulation by two females." They all looked confused that Naruto blindsided them with his intellect in this area. After a moment Mikoto's eyes glazed over at the thought, and she started to form a nose bleed at impure thoughts running through her head.

"What?" Itachi intelligently asked. "I've studied some genetics in my life" Naruto explained. Itachi looked surprised at that word "Genetics? we really haven't researched that too extensively here." Itachi informed.

Naruto looked at Mikoto expecting some sort of response. He sweatdropped at the sight of blood running down her nose. 'Is she really that much of a pervert?' He asked himself almost ashamed at her behavior. The rest of the room was still contemplating his explanation. The blood flow out of her nose seemed to be increasing. Then her nose bleed started to flow freely. It started getting thicker and faster. Naruto just sighed as the rest of the Uchiha family noticed this. "Oi! Mikoto-kaa-chan!" Naruto stated rather loudly. Her head jerked up "Uh…What?" She in after getting out of her trance. She turned her attention to Naruto, whom noticed her attention on him rubbed the area under his nose. Mikoto noticed this and wiped the blood off on the sleeve of her shirt 'I never thought mikoto was a pervert, Kaa-chan probably did that to her.'

After composing herself she smiled brightly at Naruto "So Naruto-kun do you want to spend the night?" Naruto shrugged not really caring "Sure, but I need to go get clothes though." Itachi waved his hand dismissing the idea "I'll just make a kage bushin." Naruto nodded his as he subtly activated his Sharingan to copy the useful justu. Itachi used he familiar cross sign "Kage bushin no justu" there was a poof of smoke that announce the arrival of the shadow clone. Naruto smirked at the fact that he had succeeded on acquiring two justus in one day. Now all he needed to do was practice.

Bedtime

Naruto put his futon next to Sasuke traditional Japanese bedroom. Mikoto bid them goodnight as she closed the door. "Night kaa-san/Mikoto-kaa-chan!" Sasuke and Naruto said respectively as they laid down in preparation for sleep. Not noticing the lack of foot-steps walking away.

Naruto sat up and turned towards Sasuke with a serious expression.

"Sasuke how do feel about tonight?" Sasuke turned toward Naruto and shrugged at the unkown concept. "I didn't really know what was going on, did you?" Naruto nodded "Well your mom feels the same love that a man and a women share whom are married. But your mom feels that same love for a women, which so happens to be my mother." Sasuke seemed to be understanding this somewhat, yet he was still confused. So Naruto decided to explain even further. "There is different kinds of love like familial love, this is the love that one feels for a family member. Then there is the romantic love this is one the one that your mother has for mine. If you don't understand then you will when you're older" He finished with a fake smile that masked the pain that he felt.

Outside the room

Mikoto was up flush against the door with her ear pressed against it, listening to the conversation within the room. Sadness found its way to her obsidian depths. Her posture straightened, as her thoughts turned somber on how Naruto acquired that knowledge. She sighed and turn to the stairs. 'That boy, too become so wise at seventeen, I feel he only told us a mere fraction of the pain that plagues his soul' She shook her head forcing the sad thoughts to leave her. Making her way down the stairs she turned her thoughts to more cheerful. 'Thank Kami-sama that he explained my love for Kushi-chan' She breathed a sigh of relieve. Smiling wistfully at her lost love, Mikoto got ready for bed as well.

Back to me

"So do you understand now?" Sasuke looked slightly confused. He put up his index finger "One question" Sasuke turned to Naruto hoping for affirmation "Yes?" The blonde asked. Sasuke looked sheepish."Are we like brothers now?" Naruto smiled fondly at the term. "Not by blood." Sasuke instantly saddened at the information. "Hey we can still be brothers in all but blood." Naruto said comfortingly. Sasuke looked happier at that information. He nodded as a smile graced his features "Sure Nii-san." Naruto smiled brightly.

Naruto noticed that somebody wasn't at the house tonight so he asked the young Uchiha "Hey were was your father tonight?" Sasuke crossed his arms in anger and a little bit of sadness. "Tou-san doesn't come home, usually he's at the police department. The times that he does he is usually with Itachi."

Naruto smiled empathetically knowing how that felt. "Sorry, but school's gonna' be fun tomorrow." Sasuke looked confused again. Naruto smirked at the young Uchiha's expression. "Ya' know you wear the confused look a lot," Sasuke confusing persisted "What's going to be fun tomorrow?" Naruto smiled fox like, that made his eyes close. "School" The eight year Uchiha brows furrowed in frustration, and he grunted out "Why?" Naruto's smile lessened to allow his eyes to be seen, showing understanding. "That's because you have me as a best friend." Sasuke smiled warmly and went back and under his covers, their warmth enticing him, Sasuke curled up in them and whispered "Oyasumi, Nii-san" Naruto smiled fondly at Sasuke. "Oyasumi, Otouto" Naruto got under the covers and thought 'Kami-sama. I promise I won't fail this world...dattebayo' Sleep soon enveloped him.

Please tell me how I did since I redid this chapter. Contructive criticism and ideas always welcome.