Hello people!!!
It has been months… but the 10th grade is not easy. I am so sorry I have not updated any of my stories, both are pretty much on hiatus… more or less cause I cant think of anything to write for them.
I have, however, come up with a new idea for a new story!!!!
So this is pretty much like a summary/beginning chappy.
I own nothing!!!!! Except my ideas that will randomly pop up throughout the story.
Enjoy!!!!!
And a review or two would be nice as well lol.
"talking"
Thinking
Alice vision
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"BREATH BELLA!!!!"
Two large hands pressed down onto the unconscious brown haired girl's chest. The rain falling from the blackened sky mixed with the tall teens falling tears. He looked down at Bella, her eyes closed to the pitter patter of the rain, as his body began to shake. He gently shook her, anything, in the hopes that Bella would open her eyes and smile at him once again.
Minutes passed and Jacob crumpled onto the dead girl, his body convulsing in sobs, "No Bella! Please come back… please…"
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A girl with swirling brown locks stood at an edge of a cliff overlooking an angry sea. The sky is blotched with dark clouds and droplets soon fell, drenching her clothing. The girl looked up at the darkened sky, and smiled, tauntingly almost, and leaned over the edge, as if reaching for someone not there.
Alice's caramel eyes flew open in shock as the vision went black.
"Okay lets stay calm Alice, your visions have holes in them all the time…" she tried to rationalize with herself, failing miserably.
This all took a matter of a second, snapping out of her shocked state of mind before her family could notice, or so she thought.
"What? Did you see Chanel taken off the market?" Rosalie said, for she caught a glimpse of Alice's devastated look, as she entered the open glass doors of the house.
Alice did not answer but instead got up and went to her room, Esme, Carlisle and Jasper were out on a hunting trip.
When safely in her room she began to worry, "What am I to do? I saw her future disappear… just blank, nothing, nada. I know Edward told us to leave her alone, stay out of her life but I could not help it, I wanted to see how she was, if she was just as upset and destroyed as we are and now I wish I had done it sooner… I don't want to think that she really is… gone… holes Alice, remember your vision is not perfect." She was slightly relieved that Edward was not with them but in South America, he would have known instantly what she had seen and… she did not want to think about that. she knew even though he had tried to hide when he was still with them that he was hurting, like a part of him was ripped out and all thats left is to little to bear.
Alice was in a state of turmoil, very uncommon for a vampire, this was bothering her greatly and she knew she had to tell someone, but who?
Then she saw something new, and not completely sure she went to find Rosalie. She found Rosalie in her and Emmett's room, brushing her hair in front of floor length mirror.
"Rosalie," Alice spoke, "I saw something… distressing."
Rosalie turned her head slightly, "If it does not include my shipment of distributor caps being delayed then"
"It was about Bella," Alice cut her off, "she committed suicide."
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There we go!!! Not much but it's a start.
This is how I write however, when I believe is a good time to end a chapter I end it, ok?
Yes this is taking place during New Moon, but instead of Jacob being able to rescue her he is too late. no I do not believe I actually kept with what really happened in the book (in the sense of the sequence of events of Alice telling Rosalie), and if I didn't I am very sorry, but do not shoot the writer!!!
Let me know what you think of this!!!! Feedback is wonderful, and in the case of my friends harassment is entertaining!!!! also any questions i would gladly answer.
REVIEW!!!! Please.
Lil' kari
