Heyy this is my first story so please review and tell me how I can improve
Disclaimer: Oh how I wish I was Stephenie Meyer
I closed my eyes and whispered, "I love you, Edward."
I held my breath as I waited for Laurent to make his first move. I knew I was going to die and I did not try to stop it, I just waited. Laurent pressed his nose against my collar bone, inhaling and savoring the moment. I tried not to think of what his cold touch reminded me of, but the hell, i was going to be dead soon anyway. So, i let the memories go. I let the dam that was holding all my memories of Edward break. The memories came crashing behind my eyes, one by one. I hoped Laurent hurried because I was torturing myself more then he ever could. I then felt it. His teeth sinking into my neck and I screamed in pain. Everything started going dark but before I was unconscious I pictured Edward.
At first I thought I was dead, but shouldn't the pain go away when you die? My pain got worse. The pain spread like wildfire through my body, it felt like I was burning. I opened my eyes and at first everything was blurry but I herd a distant growling. As I looked, I saw a huge black wolf followed by several more wolves. I knew it was Jacob and the rest of the wolf pack.
Last week when I couldn't stand the silent treatment that Jacob was giving me I went and confronted him. What I didn't expect was to find the mysterious 'bear' or wolf that has been killing people in front of Jacob's house. Jacob ended up telling me everything and stopped ignoring me. The problem was that even though he wasn't ignoring me he was too busy hunting the vampires to hang out. Without Jacob to hang out with I couldn't stand the hole in my heart which is why I came searching for the meadow today.
The pain was almost too much, I was screaming in agony as the fire spread. Was I on fire? I didn't see any fire but my vision was blurry. Where was Laurent? Couldn't he just finish me off? This was too much, I would rather die. The growling finally stopped and in a few minuets I saw Jacob standing over me. I tried to tell him to put out the fire, or make it stop hurting, but all that came out was another scream of pain. Then I saw Sam stand over me. Ugh, I still hated him, no matter what Jake had said.
"What are we going to do?" Jake whispered, it was amazing I even herd him over my screams.
"There's nothing we can do now, we'll come back in three days and then..." Sam said in his usual calm voice, but he couldn't seem to finish the sentence. And then what? What's in three days? Where's Laurant? I wanted to scream.
"NO!" Jacob yelled, his face was contorted in pain and agony, almost as if he was on fire too.
"Jake, we'll have no choice." Sam said in his usual calm manner that always annoyed me.
"No no no no no..." Jacob whispered before turning around and running toward the woods. What was going on? Why was Jacob so upset? Couldn't anyone tell me??!!!
"I'm sorry Bella, we were too late." Sam whispered before taking off in the same direction as Jake. It suddenly clicked. The pain was making it hard to think but i suddenly understood. Laurent bit me, and he was going to kill me but the wolves killed him. Laurent bit me but did not kill me. I wasn't dying, i was becoming what i always wanted to be. A vampire.
I know it was short but what did you think??Do you want me to continue?
