Alright, the previous story is just a test run to collect feedback. Now, here is the official thing.
Prologue
CRASH! Glass shatter as a short blonde boy, with a red cape with the symbol of a snake at a stake, crashes through a 100 feet tall building thru one of the windows. After for one split second, a row of flame follows. The blonde kid clapped his hand and hit one side of the building. Horizontal walls appear as he safely landed on it, but a random ball of fire is launch at him. The kid dodges it just barely, and rushes toward the open sea, only to find a wall of fire blocking his path.
Turning, he face a tall slim black hair male, with a white suit with the words Justice on the back. He wore a glove with special symbols, and he is pointing his fingers at the Blonde kid. "Final warning- stay down." The man said.
"Hell no," The blonde kid said angrily. He clapped his hand and touched the floor with the palm of his hand, a spear materializes beneath him. He tightened his grip on the spear, and pointed it toward the black hair male. "I don't mind fighting you."
"Edward, you know that what you did back there, sinking my initial marine fleet, is completely unacceptable!" The black hair male said in frustration. "I thought… I thought we were friends."
"We are no friends anymore, the moment you lead your ships to kill those who have rescued me." Edward said in anger. He threw his spear toward the black hair, only to see it set on fire.
"You leave me no choice." The black hair man said. "It's time to fight."
"Damn right, Mustang." Edward said before transmuting one of his arm into a sharp blade.
Edward crie out a huge battle cry before jumping toward Mustang with his sword. He swung it with great agility, but Mustang dodges it with ease and blast Edward with a huge level of fire. Edward blocked it quickly with a wall that materializes, and he swung his blade hand toward Mustang's stomach. Mustang blocked the sword with a sword of his own, and he said, "Playtime is over, Edward."
Mustang grinned cockily as he hurled a huge mass of fire toward Edward, who quickly claps his hand and touched the floor, a huge wall appearing in front of the fire. Edward claps his hand again, only to transmute a sword, and he lunged it at Mustang. Mustang yell, "You can do better than this!" as he dodges it with ease.
Edward transmuted a giant cannon facing Mustang, and he fired a giant cannonball at Mustang, who just smirk and burn it up. "Hey, shorty, can you stop pulling up cheap tricks like these? I thought you are better at Alchemy than me." Mustang asked.
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING SHORTY!" Edward roared as he turned to punch Mustang with thousand of punches. Mustang took some of the hits, before backing off to fire a fireball at Edward.
Edward barely dodges the fireball before he replied with his sharp blade at his hand. He cut thru Mustang's gloved hand, and yelled, "Now, you can't perform ALCHEMY!"
Edward laughs, but Mustang snapped his bare hand, revealing a spark of flame. "It just seem to me that you forget that I met Truth too." Mustang said cockily. Mustang basted Edward in the chest with the hottest and biggest fire, causing Edward to knock over unconscious. "Now, if you may, Edward, I, Captain Mustang of the Marines, arrested you for a sentence in Impel Down." Just as Mustang said that, a woman came over and cuff Edward's hand. The woman said to Mustang, "Two things. Number one, the navy wants you back at the HQ."
Mustang carried Edward up and said, "Why?"
"It's an order, Mustang." The woman said. "Number two, what would Edward think?"
Edward flinched when he heard his name, and he said in a near silent voice, "I am not gonna forgive you, Mustang," Over and over again as he lay semi-unconscious.
Mustang told the woman, "Put him under the deck," as he walked toward his own office. He slammed the door shut as he cried silently to himself. "Sorry, Edward, for doing this." Mustang said silently, "But you leave me no choice."
AFTER THE FIGHT…
Chapter One: Escape
Edward awoke in a small cell in an unknown place. The air is dark, and Edward cover up his nose while slowly fanning his hand. Where am I? Edward thought as he struggles to remember what happen after the fight. He passed out, and Mustang probably put him in some prison. Edward touched the cell bars, only to find that it contains sea stone prism in it, along with steel.
Edward looked around. There is barely any guards, at least no visible, but still, it is risky to escape without a second thought.
Screw it, Edward thought as he clapped his hand and touched the wall. Blue lightning surrounds the cell bar, and in an instant, a hole appear. The prisoners nearby suddenly looked at him with great interest, which Edward assume they also want to escape. However, he can't promise them that because he have to find out about the place first. He wandered carefully and silently down the hall, only to find occasion jailers walking by. He hides from every one of them, not wanting to restored to violence. Violence is the final option in a time like this. He creep down the floors, thinking the prison exit is at the bottom floor. However, the more he goes down, the more unpleasant it is for him to stand. How could a prison get worse as you venture downwards, He thought silently to himself. Edward turns his head and headed up instead. As soon as he reaches the topmost floor, however, there are a heavy number of marines. To play it smart, he secretly knocked out one of the marines and stole his uniform. It is a bit too big for him, but… NO! I CAN NOT ACCEPT THE FACT THAT I AM SO SHORT! He thought to himself as he walked toward the mass of marines. "What's going on," Edward asked one of the marines.
"Isn't she gorgeous?" The marine answered back. Edward looked, only to find a tall lady. She is beautiful, but still, Edward find her to be any average women rather than something so special. Also, why is everyone so much TALLER than him?
Edward walked away from the mass to find out a way to escape. As he continued to wander around, he bumped into a boy in an area with no marines. "Ouch!" The boy yelled as Edward accidentally hit him. "Oh crap, a marine found me!" The boy yelled when he saw Edward.
Edward study the boy. He have messy black hair and wore a straw hat, for some reasons, Edward felt it is precious to the boy. Edward said, "I am not a marine. Who are you?"
"If you are not a marine, then why wear their uniform?" The boy asked, clenching his fist.
"This is just a disguise," Edward said. "I am Edward Elric, and you are…"
"I am Luffy! And I am here to rescued my brother!" The boy said.
To be Continued…
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