Playing Hard
(1st UNEDITED DRAFT)
(Disclaimer: I do not own Kickin' It. I own the story plot for this Fanfic and the characters who are not involved in the TV Show. Kickin' It belongs to Diseny XD. This fanfic story was written for entertainment purposes only.)
"Sometimes people play hard to get to make, sure that the other person's feelings are real."
"Don't play games with a girl who can play them better."-Kim Crawford
"One day she'll start sending you mixed signals, and you'll get mad because she finally learned how to play your game."- Jack Anderson
(1st Chapter Starts on the Next Page)
Jack said, "Yeah?"
Kim asked, "Do my shoes match my eyes?"
Jack looked down at her shoes and then back up at her eyes.
Kim suddenly asked throwing him off, "Are you checking me out?"
Kim decides that since Jack won't dare to make a move she'll be the man and make it first. But soon it starts to turn into a game...a competition. In Jack's eyes he's trying to win like it's one of his karate matches. In time will he see it wasn't just a game? That Kim only acted that way to get his attention while other girl's failed miserably. Or will he ruin it all himself & Kim?
What Readers Have To Say About, "Playing Hard":
- Haha! that was cool! :) Funny!
I LOVED IT! update soon :)
- Jamie
StayWeird (The author of Perfects Overrated, Crazier, and When You Love Something)- Hey! I really liked it. I found it very cute. I like how you incorporated two different perspectives. How you made Kim go in it with a plan and had Jack slowly catch on. Update soon! I'm excited to see what happens :)
Kickin it Stories - OMG..ITS sooo funny..really amazing and interesting story..please update soon
AlphaBetaSoup (The author's of the very popular Vandals Anonymous)-
Well done!
I honestly thought that this was hilarious and I believe that this story has lots of potential to be an excellent read.
The spelling and grammar were near perfect and you managed to maintain Jack and Kim's personas throughout the chapter without drawing them out of character, which I think many people have trouble doing.
So bravo! I will be waiting for the next chapter and I do hope that you manage to incorporate the other Wasabi Warriors into the FanFic more. It may be KICK-centric, but that's no reason to ignore the other characters.
— ALPHA
Mickey Rae - This story is da bomb! totally awesome! keep up the good work and update ASAP!
nclhdrs1717 - I'm laughing like an idiot yet agin becuase this chapter was hilarious! I can't wait for 3 they're so good!
Livy.G - Omgg did not see that coming! Please update soon! I love this story! And jack should definatly go after her! I mean he does really care about her!
Anyways hope u update realllly soon! Cnt wait to see jacks reaction! :o omg!
-Livy.G
Get-Up-and-Fall-Again (The author of Kickin It: What A Life To Live)- L0V3 1T! Y0U SH0ULD KEEP WRITING :) UPDATE ASAP :)
SupernaturalDreamer2448 - this is one of the best stories ive read and do you have any idea just how many that is? This story is amazing! seriously plz keep writig
emeralgreenlove - I love your pic for the story and i loved the story itself. I didnt exactly picture this to end this way, but ok. i definitely thought that the pick up lines were awesome, i especially loved the dirty bit ( i laughed at those). Anyhow, i wish i could say update but its sadly over, so good job and if
u have any time check out my stories here as well as my fiction press (wasauskyx). Great jpb! I look forward to seeing more work by you!
K 8 8D - I LOVED THIS STORY! Thank you so much for writing it. I was almost worried there that Jack wouldn't catch on to Kim's obvious antics, but it turns out he didn't need to. Your pot was very different from the others that I've read and being unique is going to help you in the future. You really deserved all those reviews, and keep your head held high. For if you ever want to be an author when you grow up, I know you have a shot. Let me tell you, it will be hard, but that doesn't mean it isn't plausible. Who knows, you might make the New York Times Bestseller List.
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