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The Last Star Ch.1 Must be
As she ran she could see her breath her heals clacked on the cold dusty ground.
Her breathing was shallow and quick.
'Why?!' She thought.
'Why did I have to be thirsty at a time like this?!'
You see Max as people knew her...had gone out to fetch a pail of water, easyer said than done...
Flash Back, a few min.s ago...
Max had infact gotten the pail of water but on her way back to the small cottage as so many of them surounded the huge castle.
She had stumbled upon a figure in the dark, it appered to be male.
Behind the huge cloke that looked like it could manage to swallow her whole he smirked and as he did perceing white fangs glisened in the moon light.
Max shivered out of fright and the coold.
She turned on her heals and ran dropping her pail of water in the process on the dusty road.
End Of Flash Back
Max was tireing and she knew she was getting no where.
She slowed some untill she was leaning over her knees, her long blond hair going over her shoulders.
Max's blue eyes scaned for the darked cloked figure but only saw the dark shadows of trees.
As Max was standing up she fealt pressure and she coulden't see anything for a minute.
Then she feelt the rough fabric of bark on her back, then there was a could breath on her neck.
"Well...well..." Said a smooth could voice.
"What do we have here..."
Max's body stiffened.
From the corner of her eye she could see black fabric.
"...!"
Max couldn't speek, couldn't breath like her voice was turned off.
"You smell so good..." He said as he leaned closer.
"I shouldn't let such beauty go to waste." He said leaning even more close.
Just as Max thought she was going to be let go as he had lossened his grip on her she feelt pressure on her neck.
Then there was a blood curddleing scream.
Then...silence...
Later that night when Max never returned home a search party was requested.
Just before sunrise they found Max...
She lay in a pool of her own blood, faceing the stars that where still presant in the sky.
She was as pail as she could be...
Later on she was perzumed dead and was put to rest on the stroke of noon. She wouldn't see the outside world for a few hundred years...
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Next chapter Naruto will be in it!
Haku: Yah so watch and tell be wat you think!
Sakura: And we want you to guess who bit Max.
Here are the three canadates but Im the only one who knows who had bitten her!
1. Sasuke U.
2. Orochiemaru
3. Itachi U.
- Haku
