So, my first ever one-shot. Wow. Please tell me what you think in the reviews. I would really appreciate it.
TRIS POV
As I walk toward the chasm, where he is, I start getting lost in his deep blue eyes, I wonder what he feels for me. Does he feel the love I feel? Does he feel some sort of hatred? He'd better not. My man better love me! 'Til death do us apart. Wait, what? Did I just marry Tobias in my head? I'd better not have!
I make it to him and smash my lips against his. I feel a warm sensation swim through me as we touch. Damn, I love him so much!
"Hey, Tris," he says pulling away.
"Yeah."
"I think I'm in love with you."
"Nah shit!" He looks worried for a minute, then I laugh. "I'm just kidding. I love you too."
"I love you three," he says, smiling.
"I love you, Four."
"I love you, six."
"Aw," I say. "What about five? Doesn't anyone love five?"
He smirks. "Everyone loves five."
"Wait, who de freak is five? Is she another girl? Do you like five?"
"What? Five is just a damn number! Not everyone in Dauntless is named after a number!"
"Oh really," I say.
"Yes really. And just to let you know, five just happens to be my second favourite number," he says with a smirk.
"What's your first?"
"Six."
I laugh and kiss him again. And then Peter trips over my foot, falls into the chasm and dies. I killed someone. How will I ever live with myself? "Tobias," I say.
"Yeah, Tris," he says worried.
"Call Zeke. Tell him to throw a party, Peters dead!"
"I'm on it," he says as we both start cheering.
"The bitch is dead," I scream. "Life is awesome!" Then a round of cheers spreads around Dauntless.
So what do you guys think? My first one-shot ever! I think it sucked donkey balls but I wanna know what you guys think!
