Hey I'm soo excited about this story and it's my first time writing so please excuse any mistakes and I'm more than excited to consider any advice you have.
-Yours truly, Victori
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5 year old Skye got out of her bed and she couldn't have been more pissed at the fact that she was woken so much earlier than normal. She was just about to start yelling when she looked up at her bunk. She was bottom bunk and extremely happy that for once they weren't all taken. But today when she looked up she saw a big hole in the bunk above her's. She heard foot steps and by the time she realized it wasn't a nun or another kid she knew. It was to late for her to run. Who are you? "Skye asked" in her biggest voice. Hey Fury I think I found her! "A man's voice said." Well what the fuck are you waiting for then? "Another voice that must've been Fury's said." Who are you? "She asked again." She was close to tears and she knew she was about to cry but she didn't care. Hey don't cry. "The man said." I'm Coulson it's okay you're safe now. "He said."
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15 hours later everyone had introduced themselves to Mary or as she now renamed herself Skye. Everyone except Victoria Hand who Fury had just called and had a very vague conversation with to tell her they were gonna pick her up from her base.
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5 hours later everyone was pretty much half asleep except Skye who was completely asleep on the couch and you could only see her golden brown hair sticking out of the couch. Then Victoria came in. Everyone woke up as she slammed the door behind her. Her eyes darted right over to the couch. Who is this? "She asked." Oh don't tell me you're keeping the prisoners on your couch! We've been over this and it's kinda embarrassing to even say this once.
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I heard that! "Skye said." This only made Hand more angry as she walked over to the black couch with an angry look on her face. Glaring at Skye when she got to her. Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! "Skye shrieked." As she jumped off the back of the couch crying and ran over to Coulson who picked her up.
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Hey so I think this is pretty good for my first time. But you are free to comment your advice.
