Well this is my first story ever. Lol so I would appreciate it if you guys would review and let me know what I could do or even improve my stories and writing. This is a Spock/OC story and I would like to try and keep Spock as close to character as possible.
Jasmine Tala Kirk, she is Jim's twin. I gave a simple description in the story, I think.
Note: I DO NOT OWN STAR TREK. Nor am I making any profit off of this at all. All I own is what my head comes up with.
Captain James T. Kirk.
Yes, he liked the ring of that very much. And he also liked sitting in this Captain's chair too. What he liked even more is that everyone had to call him Captain. Well Bones didn't have to, but it would be appreciated.
"Kaptin, we 'ave a messedge coming in from Admiral Pike." Pavel Chekov announced.
"Wonderful, go ahead and let him through." His first officer, Spock walked up to his right side to watch the transmission play on the screen.
"Captain Kirk, I assume that you're enjoying your seat." He got that right, smart man."Well you'll have to leave it for a three week hiatus. You and the Enterprise will report back here within the next two days."
What? "Whoa. Wait a minute. Admiral Pike, why must we return to Earth?" This was ridiculous. Jim didn't want to go back to earth just yet.
"Well Capatin, something has happened back home. Something terrible." Pike looked upset. He turned around and backed up a couple of feet to reveal someone. He said something to her and she turned around.
There stood a petite but curvy figure of a young woman. Long chocolate mahogany hair that hung in think waves down her back swayed as she walked up to the screen. With one eye a steel blue with navy around the iris, and the other a deep jade with mint green, they portrayed a horrible sadness. Full lips were pulled into a slight frown and prominent features were tightened. She looked almost exactly like Jim.
"May I ask who the young woman is, Captain?" Spock inquired. Dr. Leonard McCoy decided then to walk into the picture.
"Well if it isn't Miss Jasmine T. Kirk herself. How are you doing darlin'?" Bones asked in his southern drawl.
"Hello Doctor. I'm....fine. Captain, may I ask that you temporarily let everyone leave the deck that isn't your first officer or Dr. McCoy?" The young girl, Jasmine, asked politely.
Jim, being confused as he was, sent everyone but Spock and Bones out. Once everyone left and waited outside the door, Jim stood and walked forward a little. He felt something was wrong in the pit of his stomach.
"Jazz, honey, what is it?" He noticed that tears had welled up in her eyes but she didn't let them go. He hadn't seen his sister. his twin, so lost looking in his entire life. "What happened at home?"
"Jim.... James. It's mom.... she's gone." And with that Jim set an immediate course towards Earth.
