Me:I am so sorry if I have make some mistake with my spelling is my first fanfictions. I changed the old chapter 1 because I think I can make even better.
~CHAPTER 1~
-OC's Profile-
Name:Sakura Korri
Gender:Female
Age:14 years old
Description:She have a long white hair,blue eyes, height is 150 cm. She lives in a big mansion. She have a little brother. (You will know it after a few chapters) She have 4 best friends who are having rare powers, Hitomi, Mizuki, Irene and Tsukiko.
Favourites:She love anime called Bleach. She like eat pancake,chocolate and ice cream. She loves drawing, singing and training.
Powers:She have ice powers pass down from her family and her had a will have a very long hair,emerald eyes,her clothes are like snow queen (anime) and she have an ice wings (like Toshiro's Bankai). She can summon any kinds of weapon like sword,spear or anythings.
Now,we will talk about her friends!
Name:Hitomi Raizo
Gender: Female
Age: 14 years old
Description:She have short brown hair, brown eyes and her height is 145cm. She is cheerful, childish and she loves to help people. She always make her friends happy and comfort.
Powers:She have power that she can imagined something and make it come true. She can make her drawing also can summon a sword or anything from her drawing.
Next!
Name:Mizuki Haruto
Gender:Female
Age: 15 years old
Description:She have long purple hair across her shoulder, dark purple eyes, her height is 152cm and she is wearing a pair of glasses. She like give order to someone, brave and cheerful. She met Sakura when age 11 to help her from the bullies.
Powers:She can summon blue fire and can summon a blue fire sword. She can transform to like a phoniex. She will have blue fire wings on back, tail and a very big fire sword.
Next will be Irene!
Name:Irene Atsuko
Gender:Female
Age:14 years old
Description:She have short yellow hair, yellow eyes and her height is 149cm. She loves cute animal, like to solve the problem faster and love to build a machine.
Powers: She have power of darkness like she can use shadow to attack or shield herself. When she use her power, her hair will change to purple and her eyes also change to light purple. She have black wing like bat wings when she use her power on night time.
Last,Tsukiko!
Name: Tsukiko Kaito
Gender: Female
Age: 15 years old
Description: She have long red hair reached her waist, red eyes and her height is 155cm. She is agressive, brave and serious. She feels like Sakura is her little sister even she is her best friend.
Powers:She have fire powers. She can absorb fire, summon big fire sword and can transform. She will have fire wings and can summon fire soldiers. She have red kimono and her hair become fire.
Me:I'm sorry that this is only OC's Profile... I'm trying to make the chapter 1 more better than the old chapter 1. Please reviews and thanks for reading! :)
