Chapter 1
(A/N: this is my first fanfiction hope you enjoy it as much I am going to enjoy it sorry if i spell things wrong it not a good speeler. and sorry for anyone named Jared)
Tris POV Me and my boyfriend Jared have been having trouble latley in our relatioin ship. He would never vist me or take me on dates or talked to as much. And if he did it would be late he blames it on his practice and homework but he had the same one since i can remenber and was still able to vist me. Today I followed him to the park and saw him go into the park and started talking then it turned into a make out session. then i see that it is lauren. I taped his back and he said "Get away im busy". So I said "Dont you have a girlfriend?". Then he replies " She is stupid and doesnt know what i'm planning and I was planning on braking up with her since I MIGHT not have feelings for her anymore. Anyway who are you?". This got me mad so I said "Turn around and you will see". Just as he is about to see my face and I hit in the nose there is blood coming down and I heard a creak and he sreams at me "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR!". He then sees my face and I sream at him " WE ARE THROUGH YOU JACKASS!". I run out of the park bumbing into a tree. I look up and see something else.. A person i cant see it claerly with my eyes tearing up all i see is his eyes a deep blue. I could get lost in them if i warn't for me hearing Jared running towards me. I get up and run away towards my house.
Jared POV When she punched me int he face all i see is blood and i think she broke my nose.. OWW! "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR!" Then I see her face...Tris. All I hear is "WE ARE THROGH YUO JACKASS!" And I see her run away from me. As I knock some sence to myself i run after her. I see her bumb into some guy and I see her drying and knowing Tris she doesn't cry and it hurt to finally understand the pain I caused her I know it was wrong and I cant help but feel guilty. And then she bumbs into some guy and I see the way they look at each other and I feel... jealous? And then she runs away im gussing to her house. I was about to run after her when that guy stops me and says "leaver alone she needs it right now". I glare at him and say " You dont know her she is my girlfriend and I will explain myslef to her not you adn get her back no matter what the cost, and I saw the way you looked at her so back the FUCK OFF!". Then he replies "She just broke up with you I saw what you did to her you dont deserve a girl like her and why dont you go back to kissing that girl that is nothing compared to the girl you just let go bacuse of your stupid dession!" he spits at me and he turns around which gives him the last word and it leaves me thinking about many things.
Why did i cheat on Tris with lauren that he was right Lauren was nothing compared to her.
I hope she will listen to me and forgive me?
Who was that guy whoever he is he better stay away from Tris.
Will she still love me after this?
I need to talk to her again maybe at school during class.
Can she take me back?
(A/N: Ok that was my first what do you think about it i hope to write one everyday or at least every other day on th ereview please go easy on them since it is my first one after all :) hope to see you soon)
