start reading my first fanfiction this is only chapter one so... and I'm sorry if I don't write enough because I'm only allowed on an hour a day... ENJOY!!!!!!!!
I OWN HARRY POTTER... No I don't but I wish I did
A tall, skinny man walked swiftly toward the warmly lit Great Hall. He swept his shoulder length, raven black hair away from his high cheek bones and cold, blank, shadowy black eyes that stood out drasticly against his alarmingly pale skin. As severus approched the staff table briskly he found himself choosing to sit next to Dumbledore, Spout or Flitwick.. he chose Dumbledore. Severus sat down and Dumbledore leaned over slightly toward him.
"What do you plan to do now that Harry has no further need of your schooling or protection?" He asked quietly. Severus stared hesitantly. Dumbledore had been toying with him ever since he found that he had 'cared' for Harry when really it was for Lily.
"I intend to attept to live peacefully... though in this school that may be
impossable...Severus said bitterly. He sliped back into his usual thoughts as Dumbledore turned to Sprout starting a pointless conversation about mandrakes and students flowed through the doors to sit at their house tables. His usual thoughts consited of Lily,Lily and Lily his one and only love... Severus had risked his for her son... if Dumbledore hadn't revealed he had been alive and in hideing... or brought that pheonix Severus would have died... 'All for you Lily... Did I make you happy?" he asked her in his mind. Severus allowed himself a slight smile as he blinked and saw her laughing face.
He looked up to see to the dark,star strewn sky as if waiting to see her angel swoop down to him. He looked to the doors to see the thousends of floating, flickering candle flames reflected off the empty golden plates and goblets. Then McGonagall marched into the hall followed by a long stream of first years and the sorting began. Severus found himself attempting to entertain himself by guessing which student would go to which house.
"Stone, Emily!" McGonagall called. A short girl withblack hair tied up in a floppy bun and wraped in a blus cloth made her way timly forward fixing her loose glasses that had slid down her nose perching on the end.
'Ravenclaw without a doubt...' Severus thought. he was hardly ever wrong. He sighed boredly.
"SLYTHERIN!!!" The sorting hat called. Severus was snaped out of his boredum as he stared at the student he had misplaced. He had never missed a student of his own house. Stone walked toward the table ladden with silver and green she sat down and the girl next to must have thought she belonged somewhere else also because she pointed to another house table. Severus watched as Stone explained she belonged there. The school had only just started andshe was already unpopular in her own house. Severus knew this would be a student to watch as everyone around her scooted away thinking she was in Ravenclaw.
Severus smiled slightly at how much her unpopularity reminded him of himself. He then began to think to himself again. 'I get the feeling this will be an interesting child.'
YAY my first story okay you gotta tell my how it was please if I need to change anything tell me and I"m sorry if I can't write much I only get an hour on the computer... tell me how I did on my first chapter of my first story
