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Chapter 1:

The Doctor sighs as he closes the TARDIS door. Amy and Rory had just left to go spend some time with Rory's family. The Doctor starts to walk around the TARDIS flicking switches bored. He grumbles to him self then walks into the rarely used room of his. As he looks through a drawer in his dresser for a new bow tie, he sees a picture frame on top of his dresser. He picks it up and rubs the dust off it with his sleeve. Its a picture of him and Rose in his 10th regeneration at a carnival. He smiles remembering the day. She had wanted to do something more human like so she dragged him to the fair. He didn't want to go but she insisted. They went around the carnival on different rides and playing different games. In this picture, she was holding the giant teddy bear he had won her. He suddenly dosnt feel so good and sets the picture down forgetting about the bow tie.

He walks into the counsel room and starts flicking switches not knowing what he's doing. Suddenly, the TARDIS starts to make the signature sound of when its in the Time Vortex. The TARDIS shakes violently and he falls to the ground.

"Oh no, what are you doing!" He screams at his ship. He starts to worry as he knows what is going on. He had blindly put in the cordites for the carnival. The same one Rose and his 10th regeneration would be at. I'm going to create a paradox! He thinks. All the sudden he dosnt care. He will get to see Rose again. His Rose, The Rose Tyler who is stuck in a parallel world. He knows he cant tell her what he ever so wants her to hear, but he can see her.

His smile widens as the TARDIS stops moving and the sound the TARDIS makes stops. He opens the doors of the TARDIS and see's them a couple booths away playing a game to win a goldfish. He chuckles remembering that. He had wanted a goldfish so Rose wanted to win him one. She finally got it after 67 Mires (which are the money on the planet of Ricksha). He thinks about how the Goldfish they name Nemo after a popular Earth movie. Rose thought that name didn't suit the fish sense he wasn't a goldfish. He smiles as she sees Rose win it and he sees his self smile.

"That was Brilliant, Rose!" The Doctor's 10th self grabs Rose's hand as Rose looks up at him smiling with pride.

She leans on his shoulder as she used to and puts her tongue between her teeth. "You would have done better."

Rose's Doctor shakes his head and they walk off towards the food area, "Come on! I want some good old fashion funnel cake!" He smiles as they run off towards the food like little kids running for candy.

The Doctor smiles as he watches them run off. He turns around to go back to his TARDIS to move it but someone is in his way. The Doctor looks up at the man, "Hello sir, if you would be ever so kind to just move over a little I will be on my way."

The man dosnt move and he simply states, "You will be coming with me sir." The large man dosnt hesitate and knocks The Doctor out cold on the ground. "The Master will be very excited to see this.."