So this is a redux of the first story i deleted but this one will be better then the firs chapter if you read it. And fell free to leave a review, I do read them. Unless you want to be mean about it, then i wont read them.

It was a warm night in vale as a young man is walking down the street to a store. But as he never new walking through those doors will change his life for the young man walked through the doors of the store he was greeted by a old man.

"Welcome young stranger can i give you some assistance."

The young man spoke with a deep but light voce.

"Yes you can help me by showing me where your earth dust and lightning dust at."

With that the old man pointed to the back of the store. With this the young man walked to the back of the shop. when he got half way to the back he saw a little girl no younger than 15 or 16. She was wearing a red cloak with headphones on listening to loud music and she was reading what looked like a weapons magazine.

As I made my way down to the back I picked the dust I needed till I heard a commotion up at the front desk. I when to check it out an as I did i could hear a little dialogue.

"Do you know how hard it is to find a dust shop open this late."

As one guy raises a gun to the store owner.

"Please just take my lien an-"

"Ssshhhh where not here for the lien, grab the dust"

At this I hid behind a shelf and looked over to see nine guys. eight of them where wearing all black and had bowler hats that were also black and all had shades. But the guy at the frunt desk was wearing all white including the bowler hat. In one hand he was holding a cane and in the other what appears to be a lightning crystal. Then I heard another guy or thug yelling at the girl I saw early. I turn to the aisle to see what was going on.

"Hay girl put your hands in the air"

the girl stood there as the thug got more mad marching up to the girl tapping her shoulder and knocking her hood of."Huh" was all the girls said still had the head phones on.

The thug pointed to his head as a sign to take off your headphones.

"Yes" she says as she takes of her headphones.

"I said put your hands in the air"

"Are you robbing me"

"Yes!"

"ooohh"

At that the thug when though the air, shocking me. As the leader(I so call because he's is a defferen color) saw this he nodded to tell another to get the girl. To no surprise the the thug was flung out the window. As I Looked out the now broken window I saw the girl pull out what looked like a huge scythe, twirling it around her body with ease.

"Well...get her!"

As the thugs charge her I decided to throw a smoke grenade, Taking away the sight of everyon.e. I run in and as I did all I saw was smoke till I started seeing in infared. With this I saw the six thugs and the small girl, so I saw this as my chance.

So I grab one thug and threw him in to two guys leaving three more still standing. After that I rushed one of the thugs and hit him with a powerful uppercut and as he landed I hit him with a another powerful straght punch. With the second guy I punched him in the stomach and picked him up for a powerful power bomb and as it slammed him in the ground it left cracks and the thung in awkward position. The last guy was sneaked up on and grabed at the waist and put in to the most meanest German suplex every leaving cracks in the ground also.

As the smoke subsided I notice the girl was fighting a cuple of thugs that were called for back up. When th last thug was hit he landed near the leader.

"Every penny was not wasted honest, well I believe its time for me to leave."

As he said that he tosses his cigcar on the ground and crushes with his cane and then points it to me and the girl. As I saw this i tackle the girl out of the way as the leader shot a fire ball at us causing a huge explosion. the girl was the first to recover looking around for the leader seeing him clime a ladder to escape.

"Mind if I go after him?"

The little girl ask the shop owner as he gave a slite nod. I, already recove from the explosion, was already chasing the leader on the roofs with little red behind me. Then out of nowhere a airship comes out of nowhere. That stoped in front of the leader and was trying to get a way but little red had other ideas. She started shooting at the ship making it harder for it to get away then there was a flash of purple hitting the ship but was deflected by a fire sheild. After it was deflected i see a red crystal landed at my feet and as I see the leader readied to fire his cane again and then fired.

"Fuck." is all he said as eveything want black

TO BE CONTINUED.

Well that was chapter one of "The Survivor" hope you enjoyed the rewrite of this chapter I will be doing weekly up dates or when people stated demanding for more but yea hope yall enjoyed. Se ya till.