This is my first fanfic so I will be taking all forms of criticism very seriously. This a Bleach fanfiction probably set after the New captain arc and before what ever arc comes after that. My main characters are Rukia(because I love her) and Tsuyoshi(an original). If you have any suggestions, I'm open to most things. Enjoy.
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"Things sure have been quiet since we came back, huh?" The girl's lush black hair was gently being caressed by the warm winds of Karakura.

"Yeah, I guess." Ichigo solemnly states.

"Hey Rukia-san, Kurosaki-kun! First period's about to start!"

"I'll be right there, Orihime-dono!" Rukia happily conveys. The black haired girl jumped of down to the lower ledge of the roof. Her form is as flawless as it is graceful.

A cacophonous bell rings to mark the beginning of a new day, a new adventure, and a new...student? In the classroom, a buzzing crowd of high school students were starting to settle down, and a frantic teacher demanded silence.

"All kids take your seats! I have a special treat for you guys today, we have a new student!"

"What a new student!? Sensei, we get one like every other season!!" Keigo barked in an agitated and perplexing manner.

"'Season' what is he talking about, Mizuiro?" Ichigo asked, in a definite confused tone.

"I don't know Ichigo; I've learned to ignore him after a while." Mizuiro boringly replied as he stares at his textbook. Orihime was obviously trying to hold-down her laughter.

"Kyahh! Orhime-chan you're so cute when you're not trying to laugh!" Chizuru whispers sexually. Tatsuki hits her in the head behind her.

A kid, kind of tall (a little shorter than Ichigo) with black spiky hair walks in. His aura comes off as a slack-off, comic-relief type of person. He walked in unpredictable, but yet steadily advancing course.

"Dude! he's totally ripping off my dance-walk!" Keigo whispers in rage and jealousy as he realizes it's a hit with the others.

"Oha (1)!! Students of Karakura Koukou(4)! My name is Tsuyoshi Niroku(2)" the neoteric kid exclaimed in his unprecedented speech of salutations. "Everyone yoroshiku(3)!!"

"Alright Tsuyoshi-kun you can sit there, next to Kuchiki." The distressed sensei says with joviality.

As he once again moved down the aisle like a Hawaiian dancer, his careless and inattentive gaze turned into a serious and intensive stare.

"Hey there my name is Kuchiki Rukia and-" Rukia was cut off by Tsuyoshi taking possession of Rukia's hand, he held it firmly but gently like affectionately holding a newborn.

"Rukia-san, did it hurt?"

"Huh? Did what hurt?"

"When you fell from heaven, my love." Rukia blushed. She knew it was a lame line, but she couldn't help it. She was burning up, she felt his hot hand and intent aura, she felt as if he was a complete different person. Her lips were pinned together by arrows of cupid, but managed to say one word...

"lo..love?"

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Thanks for reading rate/review whateva is your thing. I'll be sure to upadate as often as I can.Ku ku ku this story is pretty unpredictable...(I don't even know how it's gonna end yet).

1. Oha is short for Ohayo(good morning in Japanese). The term was used in OHASUTA ,a kid's morning television show, and related shows.

2. Tsuyoshi Niroku is spelled 剛 新居禄 (literally; strong spirit new house allowance) and is a play on gou nii roku(first kanji gou; second and third nii; fourth roku) which is 526 in Japanese. 526 is my name dude!! you know "Shikamaru526"!? (just if you didn't know) lol.

3. Yoroshiku is nice to meet you in Japanese.

4. Koukou is high school in Japanese