Okay here's my new story, it's about my Character Cassandra, and how she became what she is and how she ended by the Turtles…read an review

Fox-Hunting

It was a stormy night, one of those nights that Cassandra loves a lot when she was younger. Well she still loves those nights, but she can't enjoy them like before…you want to know, why she can't? Well let's start with the beginning…

An unknown location in New York

A girl was running through the dark streets of New York, her face (as much as you can see under the base cap, that she's wearing) shows the panic that she felt. Close on her heals were a bunch of Foot-Ninjas.

Foot-Ninja # 1: Give up girl…nobody can run away from our master…He'll find you where ever you'll hide…

Girl:Thinksyeah who will help a freak like me…well I may look like a normal human, but from the first moment the Shredder caught me and injected some chemical in my blood…I know I'm not normal anymore… I won't give up that easy…Shredder might caught me once and did something to my body, but I don't go back there…

Foot-Ninja #3: had sneaked behind the girl oh I know a way to bring you back he knocked her out

-Shredders HQ- Cass thoughts

I'm back by the Shredder and again they prepared me for their experiments…This Baxter guy stand next to me and he had a syringe in his hand…I think it's another injection of the chemical, because after it was injected in my bloodstream my whole body cramped and I passed out. I woke up again a few hours later (I guess) and my whole body hurt…I put my heavy hand to my throbbing head and felt something "fluffy?" and the fluffy things moved if I concentrate…"Oh my god…what did this jerk do to me?" I asked myself…I think I start crying…after a while I could hear the sound of a fight…maybe some other poor creatures which were tortured…I stand up from the ground and slammed my fists against the door…maybe they can help me…the door opened and in front of me stood a giant turtle with purple mask around its eyes… "Um … hi" I heard myself saying…It looked at me and then grabbed my hand dragging me after it…"We have to leave" It said in a male voice I think it is a male "My brothers are waiting for me" I didn't say something…I think I was to busy with following him…In the last hallway before the exit we run in three other turtles, one of the turtles didn't look too good, it looked like it were be tortured by someone and the other turtles must support him. "Donnie where the shell wa…umm who is that?" The red-clad turtle asked. "I heard something and I found her…I think Shredder did something with her…I couldn't leave her behind…" the purple-clad turtle said..." Can we go now?" The orange-clad ask, he struggled to keep the hurt turtle up and awake. "Yeah lets go…YOU pointing at me follow us!" the red-clad bark…. I just nod and follow them…

Tbc

I know it´s short, but what do you think? Good? Bad? Shall I search for a place to hide?