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Chapter 1

Thunder Storm

As I jumped off my bike from a like bike ride around Camrose and put my bike behind my garage I went inside putting my helmet on the floor and running downstairs to find something to drink. As I was looking for a good flavored pop in the fridge I took of my coat and threw it in my room. I had grabbed my good old Pepsi. I cracked it opened and chugged it until there was nothing left. Aaaa that feels better. I placed the pop can up stairs where someone eventually took it outside to the recycling bin. I walked around my house seeing if anyone was home. Absolutely no one was home. That's weird usually someone is home, I thought to myself. Well I went to go let my dog out from her cage. I went into my parent's room and unlocked my dog's cage. I waited and waited and I never seen my dog. I looked in her cage and she wasn't there. This is odd my dog is always home. Well now that I was confused I just went downstairs and turned on my PS2.

Minutes after it loaded and was playing its game video I was on the phone calling my parent's cell. Not even a ring it's like there was a rain storm and the phone lines were cutting out. Well I went downstairs and loaded my Final Fantasy X game. I liked battles because I was closer to fighting Sin and my characters were extremely strong. Hours pasted and all that was heard was me talking to the game and the game music or characters talking.

I heard the door crack and I looked up stairs. Thinking it was my family who finally came home. Something though didn't seem right. It seemed darker outside. I checked the window that was closest to the fire place to find that it was raining extremely hard and you could hear the thunder extremely loud. I saved my game and shut off my PS2. I ran up stairs and looked out the window to find that lighting was striking the ground and trees were bending over because of the wind. I was a little scared finding out what is happening but I wished it would stop. AAAAAAAAAA, I screamed when lighting struck our front sidewalk. I ran to my room, closed the door and hid under my blankets. Lighting struck the ground and I jumped. Then I don't know I think I hit something because everything went black.

Ugh, ouch what happened? I really didn't know besides that everything went black. I was trying to open my eyes but it was quiet hard. After a few minutes I finally opened up my eyes fully. I was still in the dark. Where am I? I thought and thought and then I remember that I hid under my blankets. I tore the blankets off me and then I really asked myself where am I? It was this huge field with dark clouds, and then I heard lighting. AAAAAAA I screamed. Then I looked way up and saw these towers that were like lighting rods. Then someone ran passed by me and started speaking to someone in a totally different language. I then saw this building and then I knew exactly where I was. I was in the Thunder Plains. The place where the lighting doesn't stop.

WOW! I couldn't believe I was in the Thunder plains. OUCH! I screamed. I looked at back and there was this huge fiend. It charged me. AAAAAAA! I started to run. Then everything went black yet once again.