Concrete Angels


Obviously,I don't own the chipmunks and chipettes,it has a OC MOI!WARNING I might be a little random.Dave dies and the chipmunks get abused by Ian?Can the chipettes save them?

Claire's eyes were watering up,her soon to be husband,Dave was laying motionless in a coffin.The poor chipmunks,and their friends,the chipettes,had thier small little bodies on Claire's shoulder.

Poor Theodore couldn't take it anymore,he was crying hysterically.

"It's okay Theodore." said Theo's best friend Eleanor in a comforting tone.

A female chipmunk with medium,wavy black hair in a long black dress,like the other chipettes said "This was probally NO aceddent,and I think I know the man who did it."

"Who?" the other chipmunks asked.

Melissa just simply replied,"Ian".

"Really?" asked Alvin stupidly.

"No," Melissa began scarcasticly,"Dave just slit his neck with a knife.OF COURSE IT WAS IAN YOU BUTT NUGGET!"

"Gess,sorry I asked" Alvin said.

Alvin got on Melissa's nerves,well actually he dosen't. She just hides the fact that she liked him. Just like Brittany,she did a good job of it too.

Brittany was freaking out,she didn't like it when Melissa insulted Alvin,that was HER job.She had to think of something so Alvin would pay attention to her.

"Melissa",she began,"I don't know why you like Alvin he sucks."

Melissa and Brittany sent each other death glares.

"Oh,Britt." Melissa said cooly,"you KNOW you like him,and I DON'T LIKE HIM!YOU do!"

A random person came up to Melissa and cried "LEAVE BRITTANY ALONE!",he stomted out of the room,but it wasen't just anybody,it was internet star,Chris Crocker.

"HA!" Melissa schreached,a gay guy wants to bang you!

Jeanette and Simmon coverd Theo's and Ellie's ears.

"Melissa", Jeanette said sternly "do you even know what that means!"

"Yes,who cares,its just a word." she said,her adduitude was getting bad,and EVERYONE knows she is not pretty when she is like that.

"I care!" said Simon,you shouldn't be using that word around your sister and you KNOW it!

"Whatever" Melissa scoffed.


I know bad chapter,it will get better. I promise Melissa will get nicer. The next chapter takes place durring the barring of Dave's body.