This is my first Fan Fiction so please review, and feel free to make suggestions! Before you read Balrogar is just some name I came up with to start my story
Kurama's Brother
CRACK! Kurama's whip hit the tree behind Balrogar, as he had barely dodged the assault.
"Impressive for a human…Nonetheless, I will kill you now Shuichi Minimoto!" screamed Balrogar, now spraying lightning all around Kurama, trapping him.
"That's what you think," replied Kurama as an explosion of rose petals shot from his palm followed by a red dart. "Surprise!" finished Kurama as the dart struck into Balrogar's heart.
"Nice job Fox," said Hiei as he and Kurama left the woods, "but I would like to add you should have killed him faster, rather than letting him think he could win at all."
"But where's the fun in that?" replied Kurama, "I just wanted to have some fun before a killed him." He was now standing still as Hiei was short on the notice (a lot like how he is short in general) and he stopped a few meters in front of Kurama.
'Stupid Fox' thought Hiei, "Why did you stop?" said Hiei who was talking out loud again.
"I sense another Youko in the area," answered Kurama, his eyes fixed toward a coffee shop across the street, "he's stronger than me. I wouldn't be surprised if his fox form was different than mine."
And you would be right, said a voice caused by telepathic communication, How about I show you…. A man stepped out of the coffee shop, and all of the cars just stopped in place as he crossed the street.
"Hmm," grunted Hiei, as Kurama took a couple steps back.
The man let out a smile as he stepped onto the sidewalk, and said "Hello Kurama, Hiei, please come into the woods with me." The two followed the man as told.
"How did you know our names?" asked Hiei still keeping his cool.
"I am surprised. Hiei and Youko Kurama, infamous demon thieves should know that almost everyone in the demon realm knows your names." He paused and motioned to Hiei and Kurama to stop. He backed up and leaped forward, turning into his Youko form, standing proudly before the others. He was dark grey, and had a large green stripe of fire starting at his snout and ending at the tips of his nine tails. The fire was slicked back to resemble the way a normal foxes fur was.
This is my demon form, he declared raising his head proudly, Youko Kurama, Kistune thief of Makai, I was the assassin who injured you and ran away, I was the one that Roto really hired to kill your mortal mother, I am the one who will kill you here and now unless you bend to my will, I am your BROTHER!
