Rewritten ending of Witch and Wizard by James Patterson and Gabrielle Charbonnet

Wisty

My parents faces were reassuring, even though we all knew our necks were held on rope waiting to be snapped which would lead to our ultimate demise.

The One Who Is The One laughed upon his podium and shouted to the world of angry faces: "Soon this society will be perfect thanks to the eradication of the wretched Allgoods!"

The entire stadium cheered, and I got very angry. I lit a very bright red as my body was on fire and it burned the rope holding my neck. I ran to The One Who is The One and delivered a kick to his face. He fell to the ground his nose bleeding. I kept kicking him and lifted him up and showed him to the stadium.

"Your strong leader, look at what i've reduced him to! A bloody pulp! Do you want this weakling to be your leader?! Well do you?"

At this, the people in charge of dropping the platform that would snap my familys' neck pulled the lever and they were all snapped.

I screamed and wrung the necks of all the guards there even burning a few. I walked to The One Who Is The One who was on the ground bleeding.

"You! You caused all of this! You- you monster!" At this my eyes were red and streaming tears. My hair flew all around around me and it was burning bright.

"Look at yourself! You don't consider yourself a monster?! You're on fire!" The One Who is The One gestured to all the guards I killed, burned, and injured. "You killed innocent people. Innocent people! I thought this was only between you and I, but no, you hate everyone here!" His words rang out and I dropped him back to the ground.

A monster. A monster.

The words bounced around my mind as I came to realize what I had done.

The limp bodies of Whit, Mom, and Dad haunted my subconsciousness. The dead bodies surrounding everything. The angry faces of those I once called friends. Even Brian, the weasel, stared at me in hate, disgust, horror, and astonishment.

I dashed out of the stadium, and ran, ran until i couldn't take it anymore and cried. I cried for mom, dad, Whit, my old life, everything i once was, and who i used to be.

Whit

As soon as Wisty burned the rope and ran towards The One Who is The One, i cheered her on.

"Kill him Whisty! Kill him!" I shouted.

She beat the crap out of him and i couldn't help but feel an ultimate sense of pride at her.

But when the guy pulled the lever i screamed her name.

The look in her eyes was terrifying. I can't believe my younger sister could look that way.

I whispered one last "I love you, Wisty," and the light faded from my eyes.

"Hey, Whit." It was Celia. She was smiling at me, and held out her hand. "Let's go."

I walked into the end with Celia and hoped Wisty would be okay.

We ended up not going to the shadow world but to a new brighter place.

Finally i could touch Celia again...

A/N: Welp sorry Disembodied fans, This is a project for school but i had to share it, yes cry your little eyes out. Chapter 4 should be done by Tuesday is what i'm planning, alright?

-BrokenFireAlch